12/2/2016 c8 A Person
I love this story! The ending was so sweet, and I love Ryan. It's really weird for me because I have a boy in my class named Ryan, and I have a crush on him. Yes, that's right folks, a straight 12 year old girl is reading m/m slash. I would post this on my account, but I'm afraid someone I know in real life will find out about it (Every person I know in real life hates slash and gays/ lesbians!) In this story I don't like the racism and sexism, but it got better later on. I'll be sure to read your other stories!
I love this story! The ending was so sweet, and I love Ryan. It's really weird for me because I have a boy in my class named Ryan, and I have a crush on him. Yes, that's right folks, a straight 12 year old girl is reading m/m slash. I would post this on my account, but I'm afraid someone I know in real life will find out about it (Every person I know in real life hates slash and gays/ lesbians!) In this story I don't like the racism and sexism, but it got better later on. I'll be sure to read your other stories!
6/17/2014 c8 your1Fan
i read this last chapter and threw a party. you should write a sequel. pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese?
i read this last chapter and threw a party. you should write a sequel. pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese?
4/9/2014 c1 Sam
Uhh, I'm so perturbed. even if you don't mean to be racist some of the stuff said is seriously disturbing, I'm currently in school in Africa , everyone speaks English, there are white people in my class so yeah. Oh and this is also unrealistic as Africa is highly homophobic. Sorry to rage but I'm quite offended
Uhh, I'm so perturbed. even if you don't mean to be racist some of the stuff said is seriously disturbing, I'm currently in school in Africa , everyone speaks English, there are white people in my class so yeah. Oh and this is also unrealistic as Africa is highly homophobic. Sorry to rage but I'm quite offended
9/21/2013 c1 A.Spark
How can I say this without offending any one and making myself an ass? I consider this as I write to say that I'm slightly bothered by the glaring racism that is coming from the main character. He has no filter. My god. I'm offended as unreasonable as that might sound. And it's only the first half of chapter one! I've never heard of an interracial relationship that begun on the ground of very racist mentalities. But, you haven't lost me. I appreciate good inventive prose and great stories.
How can I say this without offending any one and making myself an ass? I consider this as I write to say that I'm slightly bothered by the glaring racism that is coming from the main character. He has no filter. My god. I'm offended as unreasonable as that might sound. And it's only the first half of chapter one! I've never heard of an interracial relationship that begun on the ground of very racist mentalities. But, you haven't lost me. I appreciate good inventive prose and great stories.
8/10/2013 c8 Julia Dawn
Loved the ending! I liked that there wasn't an infatuation between Sno and Ryan, that the age difference made Ryan seek somebody closer to his age, but that Sno wasn't cut out of the picture either.
Loved the ending! I liked that there wasn't an infatuation between Sno and Ryan, that the age difference made Ryan seek somebody closer to his age, but that Sno wasn't cut out of the picture either.
3/15/2013 c8 Tiffany Lindley
I really enjoyed reading this story. Its sweet and sexy and a little romantic. If there's more I'd be interested in reading it.
I really enjoyed reading this story. Its sweet and sexy and a little romantic. If there's more I'd be interested in reading it.
2/16/2013 c8 Guest
That ending... oh gosh
That ending... oh gosh
10/19/2012 c1 3Emerald Mist1
I love this story, I read it two years ago on my way home. It took me that long to find it again lol
I love this story, I read it two years ago on my way home. It took me that long to find it again lol
7/14/2012 c8 Da'ad
Oh that was amazing! For so many reasons such as plot, writing style, characters (freaking everyone!), pace, the hot sex...ahhhh.
Oh that was amazing! For so many reasons such as plot, writing style, characters (freaking everyone!), pace, the hot sex...ahhhh.
7/7/2012 c2 Guest
Oh my GAWD! That was an intense mix of sweet, hot, illuminating and just plain adorable!
Da'ad
Oh my GAWD! That was an intense mix of sweet, hot, illuminating and just plain adorable!
Da'ad
6/16/2012 c8 Ephira
This is so really good. Not only is the story really sexy, but in a few chapters, the whole taboo about pedophilia is approached, the veil on elderlies' sex life is lifted and some clichés about 'black' people are addressed too. But above all, the fact that this relationship is very much like one of pederasty in ancient Greece makes it all the more worth the read : it was like reading a diary written by an eromenos or something. And in eight chapters only! It's amazing. And touching.
Seriously.
This is so really good. Not only is the story really sexy, but in a few chapters, the whole taboo about pedophilia is approached, the veil on elderlies' sex life is lifted and some clichés about 'black' people are addressed too. But above all, the fact that this relationship is very much like one of pederasty in ancient Greece makes it all the more worth the read : it was like reading a diary written by an eromenos or something. And in eight chapters only! It's amazing. And touching.
Seriously.
3/29/2012 c8 anonymous
excellent read!
excellent read!
12/4/2011 c8 AdriannaRomantica
You were right, you did manage to make a cute story out of a pedophile! This story was unexpected, I mean halfway through I was like "Aww, they are so gonna end up together, fuck going back home" and then Evan came back. It was actually really cute, another story down...eight to go haha
You were right, you did manage to make a cute story out of a pedophile! This story was unexpected, I mean halfway through I was like "Aww, they are so gonna end up together, fuck going back home" and then Evan came back. It was actually really cute, another story down...eight to go haha