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7/26/2011 c2 Satellite-Princess
I like...Update Soon!
5/9/2011 c1 6Feeshes
Hah, I read this one forever ago too.

The end is hilarious... What kinda dude brings his boyfriend to get screwed by a fatherly like figure that you sorta... sold your body to... I think Ryan lost his mind somewhere along the story.

His sisters must have a VARY different view of him after that trip.

Dude, I just heard the line 'I can show you how to hump, without makin' love' I should really stop listening to Hollywood Undead. You tune into the strangest things. XD
4/23/2011 c8 16Ioga
Finished. Aw, this was so cute. And educational! Not only did I learn new vocabulary (yay for frottage), I learned some anatomy and sailing things. Thanks for doing the research! I didn't quite find myself sufficiently interested to pay attention to the motorcycle bits but I was trying to keep track of what they were actually doing in the boat at different times. Didn't manage to hang on all the time but learned something nevertheless.

And Sno got all cuter as the story progressed. Aww. The finishing touch was just dreamy.

Minor nitpicks: Sometimes, the tense fluctuates in the story. In ch. 1, it's mostly past tense at first, like "He threw me a plain white t-shirt." but after a - transition, starting "After dinner, ..." it turns to present tense ("he says") before shifting back to past tense; early chapter 7 it's present tense for a moment again, but ch 8 starts in past tense before the whole story ends in present tense again. Smaller bits: ch 3: "He says if that if the salt water dries on your skin, it'll itch like crazy." - this is true, but it sounds a bit like Sno said it in you-as-in-narrator ("...dries on my skin..") and not in you-passive. "THAT isnew." - is new, ch 4: "be marooned all by yourselves my country" +in, ch 6: cloths off - clothes.

Thanks for this!
4/21/2011 c2 Ioga
I don't generally leave reviews before I'm done with a story one way or the other, but I just got off a chapter break and was coming to review other stuff and I just HAD to start with some pon-pon-waving woots: A good Stockholm Syndrome fic! Woohoo! Just wandered in through a favourite on Fictionpress, and got lucky.

I personally think male-male (or androgyn-male) may attract people who don't particularly swing that way because it's a bit more taboo (/naughty), and a bit feistier a power struggle maybe, considering the old tradition of submissive females. No deeper theory though; I personally like unusual relationships of pretty much all sorts because of the extra psychological twist. Or so I tell myself. ;)

Thanks for this, now I probably have to read all you other stuff too.
4/8/2011 c8 TheGhostChild
FAVORITE STORY EVER!

I'm not just saying that. It was incredible. Detailed and classy yet so hot. I loved it. So amazing :)

Great job!
4/3/2011 c8 kissedbymidnight
This was a really good story. I’m glad that you finished it^_^ You had your main character mature from more of a little boy to more of a man and I always like to see characters grow and transform like Ryan did. You also had really good dialogue and description. It all seemed natural, none of it seemed forced. It was smooth reading I guess you could say. Also, yay! He got Evan^_^ I’m really glad that we got to see Sno’ again though. I got attached to him and I think you did a fantastic job of making us feel like Ryan did. I liked Sno’ and wanted him to be with Ryan, yet I wasn’t heart-broken and pissed when Ryan had to go back home and got together with Evan. Ryan became rather devious, that sneaky boy though, planning to have a threesome and teach Evan some things:) On a last note, I loved the last line of your story, ‘I’m a fucking genius.’ That was a really great way to end it.
3/10/2011 c1 1xXWhat-is-your-damageXx
YES! I have been looking for this for TWO YEARS and I finally found it again! I'm so happy! This is honestly one of my favourite stories I've ever read on FP but I haven't been able to find it since the last time. I had been reading it on my old phone and had it bookmarked and everything but then it died and I lost it. God,I'm so slow! I have read all your other stories and talked to you on the freakin' forums for Christ's sake and it never even occurred to me to check for this one... Geez, I'm really annoyed and really happy at the same time... Adding this to favourites now!
12/3/2010 c8 20diwu6398
I hate you.

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I wonder if they all showed up... but anyway, I liked Sno so much better. I LOVE old men x little boys. You evil, evil person. Why did you do this to me? Okay, I'll admit that the end sort of turned me on.

I'm sorry. I really do love you. Your stories anyway.

I'm sorry for not doing my homework either. Usually I can't do anything productive until after I do some stuff that I can't really do with my mother in the kitchen next door...
12/3/2010 c5 diwu6398
Well, now that I'm in the middle of Chapter 6, I realized that I wasn't. Generally noncon that is in the romance section is bdsm, but I guess not always. Technically it WASN'T noncon, though, because he sort of did volunteer. That's too bad, though, since I'm a huge bdsm fan. If you know of any bdsm stories on here (that are good), could you let me know?

I had a question a couple of chapters back, but it got all cleared up. Other than that, I like this a lot. I'm also probably going to waste another half hour reading this when I should do some homework.
12/3/2010 c1 diwu6398
-cough-

um...

-shocked-

I FOUND A GOOD BDSM STORY!

I actually prefer chaptered stories, but I was sort of in a rush with my essay writing (I FINISHED IT!) so I just ended up picking your third shortest story.

My one critique for this chapter is that the verb tenses get mixed up.

I think that the reaction from Lisa about Ryan is pretty realistic, but Ryan is kind of an asshole. There was something that really made me laugh, but I can't remember it. But I just randomly scrolled down the story to look for something to write about, and I was thinking of how awkward the first scene that Snow checks Ryan out is. Awkward meaning awkward for him, not awkward writing. ICK I JUST USEd THAT WORD SO MANY TIMES!

Um, that's all I can think of. I hope I'm not driving you crazy with email notifications. I'm reading on. And one of my friends says that there is a good story with a tranny that you wrote (after I suggested you to her; aren't I nice? And modest) and I was wondering which one she meant without looking through to find it. Haa sorry I'm so lazy.
11/8/2010 c1 LunchBoxBabylon
Being a Dutch person, I have only one thing to say: I freaking love coffee. Hah! Us Dutch not being much of a coffee-drinking people... -grumble- Nevertheless, I just needed to say how much ass this story kicks. Which is, uh, a lot of ass. ;}
9/19/2010 c8 37That Fabulous Chic
Pfft, the end made my day. I almost expected some sort of crazy twist, but it was the perfect little ending. I loved it 3
7/9/2010 c8 27x-ClinicallyInsane-x
Thanks for writing this. Made me laugh, blush, squirm uncomfortably and randomly open new internet tabs in hopes of putting off what happened next.

That's code for "it was suspenseful and really really good"
7/8/2010 c8 4Lost In The Ever After
Wow. Just, wow. I think I love you. Or, well, your writing, for sure. My god...i just can't get over this! Them! GAH! I've sat here for so long, both my legs are asleep, because i just could not bear to get up until it was done!

You write very, very well. And this is such an original piece (I know, that's what this site is for...but it seems thee re only so many original ideas...) and it's...you know, this is my number one favorite story now. Maybe ever. Amazing.

~Peace, Love, Laughter~

Lost~~
6/15/2010 c8 Alex
*laughs her head off at the end of the story* Oh nice nice nice! Write a short squeal please! I want to know how it goes! hahah! I loved this last half of the final chapter! You get a brand new computer for such a good job! well not really I am broke shit but its the thought that counts... right?

Anyways! I really like the last section of the story, so cute and funny. My favorite. So way to go hot shot! xD

+Alex
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