4/7/2008 c2 2arcapellago
I really think this story is so original, and the second chapter is even better than the first and the first was really really good. I like how you keep us in suspense by not revealing too much.
I really think this story is so original, and the second chapter is even better than the first and the first was really really good. I like how you keep us in suspense by not revealing too much.
4/7/2008 c2 Sara Olivia
Wow. I'm totally loving this. It's so original, well written and... HOT.
Keep up the good work!
Wow. I'm totally loving this. It's so original, well written and... HOT.
Keep up the good work!
4/7/2008 c2 2mia5081
I like how you show the "stereotypes" from both sides-not just Ryan's. I think it adds more to the characters =)
Update soon!
~Mia
I like how you show the "stereotypes" from both sides-not just Ryan's. I think it adds more to the characters =)
Update soon!
~Mia
4/7/2008 c2 LetHaL feLinE
Now that section breaks are visible, the shifting of settings in the story is lucid.
Anyway, continue writing.. :-)
Now that section breaks are visible, the shifting of settings in the story is lucid.
Anyway, continue writing.. :-)
3/31/2008 c1 2arcapellago
Oh I like this one, it seems very original in concept. You have a way with writing, it is easy to read and keeps me interested. Hope to see more soon!
I like Sno's character, he seems very interesting.
Oh I like this one, it seems very original in concept. You have a way with writing, it is easy to read and keeps me interested. Hope to see more soon!
I like Sno's character, he seems very interesting.
3/30/2008 c1 iwanttodeletethiswtf
0MGOSH! YOU ARE SO FRICKIN' AWSUM! (i believe i've sed so many times). YOU SERIOUSLY NEED TO UPDATE CUZ I LOVE THIS SOO FRICKIN MUCH. yes, it kinda sux that ryan's guna get butt-f**cked for his 1st time b4 he really truly has the chance to determine what his sexuality is, because he doesn't know yet cuz really 15 years is a short life despite what one mite think. BUT i love Sno, and i feel bad that he has to do what he's doin jus to get a nice, good-lookin kid to sleep wit but i'm sure u'll make things all nice n' sweet. but then again, maybe not. that's all up to u, but of course, we won't find out what happens next if you don't PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! cuz i think this'll be an AWESOME story. :] and that's my review for the nite! XD thank u, thank u very much! lol.
X's,
-E
ps. this looks pretty long, sorry bout that. ;]~
0MGOSH! YOU ARE SO FRICKIN' AWSUM! (i believe i've sed so many times). YOU SERIOUSLY NEED TO UPDATE CUZ I LOVE THIS SOO FRICKIN MUCH. yes, it kinda sux that ryan's guna get butt-f**cked for his 1st time b4 he really truly has the chance to determine what his sexuality is, because he doesn't know yet cuz really 15 years is a short life despite what one mite think. BUT i love Sno, and i feel bad that he has to do what he's doin jus to get a nice, good-lookin kid to sleep wit but i'm sure u'll make things all nice n' sweet. but then again, maybe not. that's all up to u, but of course, we won't find out what happens next if you don't PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! cuz i think this'll be an AWESOME story. :] and that's my review for the nite! XD thank u, thank u very much! lol.
X's,
-E
ps. this looks pretty long, sorry bout that. ;]~
3/30/2008 c1 LetHaL feLinE
I find the story appealing. Snow's character is also noteworthy. He's supposed to be a caitiff but he seems to be not a despicable person after all. I see benignancy in him despite his sexual urges toward Ryan. Ryan's also tough. I'm adding this to my favorites. Update this soon. :-)
I find the story appealing. Snow's character is also noteworthy. He's supposed to be a caitiff but he seems to be not a despicable person after all. I see benignancy in him despite his sexual urges toward Ryan. Ryan's also tough. I'm adding this to my favorites. Update this soon. :-)