for Seasons3/30/2008 c1 
1Kevin Miles
Very well done. Bravo. One note: In the third section where it says The leaves have changed colours- The second paragraph says "She givs a shaky laugh." It should say "gives"
Brilliant piece of work, though.
"And even if you don't have a pen to write, you have a mind to think and a mouth to speak."
~Leafeus Agamemnon
1Kevin MilesVery well done. Bravo. One note: In the third section where it says The leaves have changed colours- The second paragraph says "She givs a shaky laugh." It should say "gives"
Brilliant piece of work, though.
"And even if you don't have a pen to write, you have a mind to think and a mouth to speak."
~Leafeus Agamemnon