
10/3/2008 c1
24Ravina
I thought I reviewed this one before...guess not...
This was written in such a unique way, and that made it very good!
- Rebekah

I thought I reviewed this one before...guess not...
This was written in such a unique way, and that made it very good!
- Rebekah
5/15/2008 c1
3Colie Rae
Well you went for it and it's definitely different but I think it would be stronger if you had developed their personalities more solidly through their thoughts. I didn't exactly get a solid feel for either of them.

Well you went for it and it's definitely different but I think it would be stronger if you had developed their personalities more solidly through their thoughts. I didn't exactly get a solid feel for either of them.