for A Love I Refuse to Show11/3/2009 c1 
50risaisis
This was amazing. The golden bell, and the Old English writing - genius. I liked the line "I will stay in your oblivious grace". And the ending was simple, but it was good. Great use of repetition!
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50risaisisThis was amazing. The golden bell, and the Old English writing - genius. I liked the line "I will stay in your oblivious grace". And the ending was simple, but it was good. Great use of repetition!
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12/21/2008 c1 116loversdream17
Wow i really really like. Great job. Do we really see the truth at all thats a question to ponder.
116loversdream17Wow i really really like. Great job. Do we really see the truth at all thats a question to ponder.
9/3/2008 c1 7Kizera
Its weird... I can read poems and understand them rather easly aswell as take out parts and can use them for different meanings...and yet i can't write one as well as this. Good job mate ^_^
7KizeraIts weird... I can read poems and understand them rather easly aswell as take out parts and can use them for different meanings...and yet i can't write one as well as this. Good job mate ^_^
5/17/2008 c1 80VELVETxKISSES
i like this! i was in Acting II and we studied Shakespearian launguage (hope i spelled that right). so this sonnet was a breath of fresh air for me. loved it.
80VELVETxKISSESi like this! i was in Acting II and we studied Shakespearian launguage (hope i spelled that right). so this sonnet was a breath of fresh air for me. loved it.