for The Playwright9/24/2008 c1 
19Zoey McCusker
Aww! That was so sweet, sad, and down right well thought through. I've never pictured anything like this before but I love the new horizon. The picture you painted was very down to earth and, like you said, definitely something that can be easily applied to real life. I especially loved teh last two lines. It summed it up very nicely. :)
And as though it wasn't obvious, I loved this poem! :)
19Zoey McCuskerAww! That was so sweet, sad, and down right well thought through. I've never pictured anything like this before but I love the new horizon. The picture you painted was very down to earth and, like you said, definitely something that can be easily applied to real life. I especially loved teh last two lines. It summed it up very nicely. :)
And as though it wasn't obvious, I loved this poem! :)
4/12/2008 c1 50Andrea Lotte
I like how you extended the metaphor of the play...I like the ending. But some of your 'I's aren't capitalised...is that intentional or a typo?
Plus there is a typo on "peculiar."
Other than that, nice work!
50Andrea LotteI like how you extended the metaphor of the play...I like the ending. But some of your 'I's aren't capitalised...is that intentional or a typo?
Plus there is a typo on "peculiar."
Other than that, nice work!
4/4/2008 c1 19SomethingNifty
You continue to astonish me! I absolutely loved it! The form was so unique!
~SomethingNifty
19SomethingNiftyYou continue to astonish me! I absolutely loved it! The form was so unique!
~SomethingNifty