for Only You4/10/2008 c1 
72angel953
aw this is so sweet! i love it! i wish i knew who this was about...i command ou to tell me next time i see you lol nice work!
72angel953aw this is so sweet! i love it! i wish i knew who this was about...i command ou to tell me next time i see you lol nice work!
4/2/2008 c1 WriterXO
I thought this poem was very good. I really liked it and enjoyed reading it. However, I would like to make one suggestion which to get rid of "&" which you have in the very beginning. The only reason I say that is because it throws the reader off when first getting into the poem. Other than that good job. =)
I thought this poem was very good. I really liked it and enjoyed reading it. However, I would like to make one suggestion which to get rid of "&" which you have in the very beginning. The only reason I say that is because it throws the reader off when first getting into the poem. Other than that good job. =)