for Four Horsemen and a Chef5/29/2008 c2 Equilibrium
Oh gosh, I totally recognised Soul from the moment Hell said "FIRE!" That's brilliant! And you seem to enjoy writing about undead, don't you?
Great dialogue. I liked the bit that went “No, who. Hell is a who".
Can't wait for more. Hurry and update!
Oh gosh, I totally recognised Soul from the moment Hell said "FIRE!" That's brilliant! And you seem to enjoy writing about undead, don't you?
Great dialogue. I liked the bit that went “No, who. Hell is a who".
Can't wait for more. Hurry and update!
5/28/2008 c2 
30MirriTandris
I don't know if I should be worried or not that I find a story about impending doom amusing...^^
Good job! I await the next chapter.
~*WynnFire*~
30MirriTandrisI don't know if I should be worried or not that I find a story about impending doom amusing...^^
Good job! I await the next chapter.
~*WynnFire*~
5/16/2008 c1 Equilibrium
Nice first chapter. The description of Pestilence made me smile. You've got a knack for creating very unorthodox but appealing main characters, and your obsession with mythology certainly shows through! Keep it up!
Nice first chapter. The description of Pestilence made me smile. You've got a knack for creating very unorthodox but appealing main characters, and your obsession with mythology certainly shows through! Keep it up!
5/12/2008 c1 10Crownbreaker
Intriguing story so far. I presume the sick guy is Pestilence and the large guy is famine. It will be interesting to see where this story goes.
10CrownbreakerIntriguing story so far. I presume the sick guy is Pestilence and the large guy is famine. It will be interesting to see where this story goes.
4/25/2008 c1 30MirriTandris
Wow! This looks like an interesting beginning. I hope to read more soon! ^_^
30MirriTandrisWow! This looks like an interesting beginning. I hope to read more soon! ^_^
4/3/2008 c1 15BWeep
Abbot and Costello...are those nicknames or the actual names?
Interesting stuff... Write more! =)
15BWeepAbbot and Costello...are those nicknames or the actual names?
Interesting stuff... Write more! =)
4/2/2008 c1 4Guardian's Light
Wow, this is kinda wierd. I'm writing a story with the four horsmen too. Anyway interresting start, though I'm not really all that partial to the first person thing.
On a side note I'm also reworking Tsunami so it will be better, but I can't decide whether to take the original down and repost it, or just post it as a seperate story. What do you think.
4Guardian's LightWow, this is kinda wierd. I'm writing a story with the four horsmen too. Anyway interresting start, though I'm not really all that partial to the first person thing.
On a side note I'm also reworking Tsunami so it will be better, but I can't decide whether to take the original down and repost it, or just post it as a seperate story. What do you think.