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2/21/2009 c1 4Jasey Rae
I loved the beginning, it had such a neat feel, I got chills when she stepped onto the ledge of the cliff. i went into it fully expecting her to jump off the cliff, it was an interesting twist when she didn't. i think it would have been even more of a twist if she did jump, though. it was a good story, i wouldn't add anything to it. it's great the way it is!
5/3/2008 c1 27Just Silly Me
what happens after this, do u know? just curious. could have a few more commas tho...

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