for city nights6/11/2009 c1 
173Little girl Big world
I really like the rhyme scheme on this the words just seem to flow so well without being predictable. Good job on this!
173Little girl Big worldI really like the rhyme scheme on this the words just seem to flow so well without being predictable. Good job on this!
4/5/2008 c1 57INeedYou
hey you geegoat =3
omg i can't believe you found my fictionpress XD *embarrassed* but thanks for the comment ily :)
I love this poem. It's so cute. :D I like the rhyming
57INeedYouhey you geegoat =3
omg i can't believe you found my fictionpress XD *embarrassed* but thanks for the comment ily :)
I love this poem. It's so cute. :D I like the rhyming
4/4/2008 c1 20Twilight Starr
I liked the rhyming. "Blurry lights" is a good description. I like "cold chills; cheap thrills". Good job! Good luck with poetry and life. Have a brilliant day.
~Twilight Starr~
20Twilight StarrI liked the rhyming. "Blurry lights" is a good description. I like "cold chills; cheap thrills". Good job! Good luck with poetry and life. Have a brilliant day.
~Twilight Starr~