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6/11/2009 c1 173Little girl Big world
I really like the rhyme scheme on this the words just seem to flow so well without being predictable. Good job on this!
4/5/2008 c1 57INeedYou
hey you geegoat =3

omg i can't believe you found my fictionpress XD *embarrassed* but thanks for the comment ily :)

I love this poem. It's so cute. :D I like the rhyming
4/4/2008 c1 20Twilight Starr
I liked the rhyming. "Blurry lights" is a good description. I like "cold chills; cheap thrills". Good job! Good luck with poetry and life. Have a brilliant day.

~Twilight Starr~

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