for Dead4/28/2008 c1 
95XxXKristie MarieXxX
I love it! Not the situation i hope you no but the poem its self. But I can relate but its my mom not my father.
XKristie MarieX
95XxXKristie MarieXxXI love it! Not the situation i hope you no but the poem its self. But I can relate but its my mom not my father.
XKristie MarieX
4/12/2008 c1 1AngelofDarkness1605
Wow, that's very impressive! It's just... I dunno. The layout made me 'feel' the emotions even more, great job!
1AngelofDarkness1605Wow, that's very impressive! It's just... I dunno. The layout made me 'feel' the emotions even more, great job!
4/5/2008 c1 495mate.feed.kill.repeat
Dude. Emotional, in a way that I like. I love the formatting. I think that a lot of people are afraid to actually use formatting because of how readers generally frown upon it, but I think it helps the emotion a lot. It makes a lot of words stand out better, makes this sound so much more frustrated.
This was really good. Amazing. I love it.
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495mate.feed.kill.repeatDude. Emotional, in a way that I like. I love the formatting. I think that a lot of people are afraid to actually use formatting because of how readers generally frown upon it, but I think it helps the emotion a lot. It makes a lot of words stand out better, makes this sound so much more frustrated.
This was really good. Amazing. I love it.
-stix-