for Wait What?8/5/2009 c1 
1liseymarie94
i really want to make a movie out of this. :) i think i mite if that's okay. lol
1liseymarie94i really want to make a movie out of this. :) i think i mite if that's okay. lol
8/2/2009 c19 Shadow Kissed Twilight
W.O.W Wonderfully Over-all Wondrous! :D
You know how much I thoroughly enjoyed this story.
I swear you could publish it. :)
Yes, that great.
I had wondered why Emma was spending like that... Makes since. Haha! Thanks for the insight on Emma and Vick's date. That was epic. Since when did Dom become such a sweetheart? I guess I kinda saw that coming though. I love how Lex and Nick were at the restaurant. It was adorable. :) Beside the fact that there were tons of people there... -.- I loved how Dom and Eric bantered.. the whole being gay thing. *rolls eyes* Lovely.
I couldn't stop smiling, except, of course for the times I was crying and angry. I loved it from start to finish. :3
Be safe!
-Danni
P.s- They didn't have Dragon's Bait at the library. I am going to have to buy it. Oh, and which of Tamora Pierce's books comes first? Thanks again!
W.O.W Wonderfully Over-all Wondrous! :D
You know how much I thoroughly enjoyed this story.
I swear you could publish it. :)
Yes, that great.
I had wondered why Emma was spending like that... Makes since. Haha! Thanks for the insight on Emma and Vick's date. That was epic. Since when did Dom become such a sweetheart? I guess I kinda saw that coming though. I love how Lex and Nick were at the restaurant. It was adorable. :) Beside the fact that there were tons of people there... -.- I loved how Dom and Eric bantered.. the whole being gay thing. *rolls eyes* Lovely.
I couldn't stop smiling, except, of course for the times I was crying and angry. I loved it from start to finish. :3
Be safe!
-Danni
P.s- They didn't have Dragon's Bait at the library. I am going to have to buy it. Oh, and which of Tamora Pierce's books comes first? Thanks again!
7/31/2009 c19 Grenna-Chae
Oh, it's the end now!
Really enjoyed reading this whole thing, though. Good luck with anything else you write.
*hugs*
~Mary
Oh, it's the end now!
Really enjoyed reading this whole thing, though. Good luck with anything else you write.
*hugs*
~Mary
7/30/2009 c19 4LaMeO1
congrats on the finish.
it was cute.
i agree with you on the whole dom thing.
well i cant wait for whatever you have coming next
=D
4LaMeO1congrats on the finish.
it was cute.
i agree with you on the whole dom thing.
well i cant wait for whatever you have coming next
=D
7/30/2009 c19 4SilverChelle14
Aww! It's over. I want more! lol. Awesome ending, though. You wrapped it all up and tied up loose ends and stuff. This is one of the first stories I favorited on here, and I'm definitely not sorry for doing so. ^-^ It was fun and great and delish. I LOVED IT I LOVED IT I LOVED IT IMMENSELY!
-GH*
4SilverChelle14Aww! It's over. I want more! lol. Awesome ending, though. You wrapped it all up and tied up loose ends and stuff. This is one of the first stories I favorited on here, and I'm definitely not sorry for doing so. ^-^ It was fun and great and delish. I LOVED IT I LOVED IT I LOVED IT IMMENSELY!
-GH*
7/30/2009 c19 6Summer Jasmine
Hey this is a great ending to this story. I love how you wrapped everything up nicely. Great work! I can't wait to see what you write next. If I haven't already I'm going to add you to my favorites. Which I think I may have already done it, but can't really remember. (all part of my getting old. bleh! lol.) Anyways, again great work and keep it up. You're writing style is fantastic and easy to follow.
(oh and I'm on Twitter as well. SummerJasmine. If you want to follow me.)
6Summer JasmineHey this is a great ending to this story. I love how you wrapped everything up nicely. Great work! I can't wait to see what you write next. If I haven't already I'm going to add you to my favorites. Which I think I may have already done it, but can't really remember. (all part of my getting old. bleh! lol.) Anyways, again great work and keep it up. You're writing style is fantastic and easy to follow.
(oh and I'm on Twitter as well. SummerJasmine. If you want to follow me.)
7/30/2009 c19 18Aoide Mnemosyne
*claps* Brava! Lovely epilogue, very well done. Two notes.
You used the wrong 'to' once and the wrong 'their' once, but that's it for spelling errors.
I would jazz up the ending just a tiny bit, instead of 'And to think...it all started when I was eight'.
*sighs contentedly* I'm very happy with the ending, actually. Derik and the girl he was yelling at intrigued me...
Anyhow, I greatly look forward to more of your writing! Cheers!
~Sophia, (The Datura Rose, TheAccidental, and Modern Moonlight :)...)
18Aoide Mnemosyne*claps* Brava! Lovely epilogue, very well done. Two notes.
You used the wrong 'to' once and the wrong 'their' once, but that's it for spelling errors.
I would jazz up the ending just a tiny bit, instead of 'And to think...it all started when I was eight'.
*sighs contentedly* I'm very happy with the ending, actually. Derik and the girl he was yelling at intrigued me...
Anyhow, I greatly look forward to more of your writing! Cheers!
~Sophia, (The Datura Rose, TheAccidental, and Modern Moonlight :)...)
7/30/2009 c19 12Imminent Paradox
Aw, I love this ending! It's nice, sweet, and yet not completely perfect :) That's the best kind, eh? I think the Emma/Dom thing is interesting... I'd love to see where that wuold go! :) Thanks for putting this story up here for us to read! It really was amazing! ^^
12Imminent ParadoxAw, I love this ending! It's nice, sweet, and yet not completely perfect :) That's the best kind, eh? I think the Emma/Dom thing is interesting... I'd love to see where that wuold go! :) Thanks for putting this story up here for us to read! It really was amazing! ^^
7/26/2009 c18 sterngirl96yahoo
The fact that Lexi and Cole are FINALLY together made my day a whole lot better :0
The fact that Lexi and Cole are FINALLY together made my day a whole lot better :0
7/25/2009 c18 Imminent Paradox
:O That was great! I loved it! I really like how Dom and Eric team up to get the two together. It's both hilarious and really sweet :). I'm also glad that Emma's back! I missed her. I hope you plan to write more, like an epilogue or another chapter or something. If so, I'm really looking forward to it!
:O That was great! I loved it! I really like how Dom and Eric team up to get the two together. It's both hilarious and really sweet :). I'm also glad that Emma's back! I missed her. I hope you plan to write more, like an epilogue or another chapter or something. If so, I'm really looking forward to it!
7/25/2009 c17 Imminent Paradox
Great chapter! Is it wrong that I'm a bit sad that she and Dom are over? Because I am, even if I think she and Cole would be so great together :)
Great chapter! Is it wrong that I'm a bit sad that she and Dom are over? Because I am, even if I think she and Cole would be so great together :)
7/24/2009 c18 4Kina Kalamari
Yay! That was AWESOME! And the whole restaurant scene was incredibly funny. There is still an epilogue, right?
And about Lexi's age; I live in a pretty secluded place, so there aren't really 'rowdy parties' of any sort. I guess I don't really know what age would do that sort of thing. I think it really depends on the neighborhood. So I'll stop complaining. =P
4Kina KalamariYay! That was AWESOME! And the whole restaurant scene was incredibly funny. There is still an epilogue, right?
And about Lexi's age; I live in a pretty secluded place, so there aren't really 'rowdy parties' of any sort. I guess I don't really know what age would do that sort of thing. I think it really depends on the neighborhood. So I'll stop complaining. =P
7/23/2009 c18 me
So Lexi and Cole. That's cute. I guess I've been holding it against him that he broke off their friendship when he kissed her that one drunken night. I know his intentions were good and honorable and all, but I just hate it when a guy leaves a girl because he wants to protect her (or in this case her virtue :P) I guess in those cases I always feel that if I were the girl I'd be all, "Hey, why don't you freakin' let ME decide if I want you protecting my virtue, 'kay? So stop being all sweet and kiss me!"
It was good though, that end with Dom and Eric made me laugh out loud while Lex and Cole got all cute.
Can't wait for the epilogue.
So Lexi and Cole. That's cute. I guess I've been holding it against him that he broke off their friendship when he kissed her that one drunken night. I know his intentions were good and honorable and all, but I just hate it when a guy leaves a girl because he wants to protect her (or in this case her virtue :P) I guess in those cases I always feel that if I were the girl I'd be all, "Hey, why don't you freakin' let ME decide if I want you protecting my virtue, 'kay? So stop being all sweet and kiss me!"
It was good though, that end with Dom and Eric made me laugh out loud while Lex and Cole got all cute.
Can't wait for the epilogue.