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7/23/2009 c18 4SilverChelle14
Yay! Another chapter! It was so funny, and I actually didn't expect Cole to be the date. It worked out great, and I think Cole, Dom, and Eric are quite the team. They make life spicy, especially with Lexi. I loved it.
7/23/2009 c18 1checkyesdana
SO CUTE! my smile is so big right now
7/23/2009 c18 leigh-rohan
ok, so i guess the phone call from chapter 17 does make sense now, i just needed to be patient.

As for Cole and Alex, I am happy that, in the end they are together. I'm just kind of worried cuz with the relationship right now, things are not natural for alex and it feels kind of awkward. hopefully there'll be another chapter to settele things in :)

but kudos on the chapter, i lik the resolution with emma and, while at points i was suspecting it was all for a set up with cole, it was still a nice way to do it.

and also..i really liked cole in this chapter, he sounded very confident with their situation, very optimistic and willing to make things work out, it was a good chapter for him
7/23/2009 c18 18Aoide Mnemosyne
Brilliant last chapter! I loved the ending. Marvelous!

A couple typos, mostly you used 'their' when you meant 'they're' and vise versa.

*happy* Lovely way to end it, can't wait for the epilogue :)

~Sophia
7/23/2009 c18 6Summer Jasmine
awe! I totally knew it! this was a really great chapter. absolutely awesome!
7/21/2009 c17 4LaMeO1
your story is awesome.

i love it

though i'm kind of sad that it's coming to an end.

is she really going to get with cole/nick?

what's going to happen with Dom?

update!

=D
7/20/2009 c17 Shadow Kissed Twilight
I loved this chapter. It starts off strong, and ends on a well note. There break up was kinda, almost mutual. I like those break ups. A few awkward moments later and- friends again. :]

Aw, Cole is happy about it. That just makes it sweet.

Eric is an ass. Sugar, for real? Just for hiding the remote. Oh well, I think a hit in the crotch is rather even. :/ Oh, made me laugh so much. :)

Cole isn't seriously going to tell Dom, is he. Why did Eric need some guy talk? It is her room. *shakes head* Family. Man, when I was younger, since I am the oldest, every time one of my half-siblings got hurt it was automatically my fault according to my ex-step-father. They were the ones who did it most of the time, I just tried to make sure there was no blood. :/ However, I digress.

Dom does have that certain, I don't know, curtain (?) that kind of hides him. That is just what I meant. The whole family thing though, many people can relate.

You are kidding me? Only two chapters left in this wonderful story? I imagine that I am going to be sad when it is over, but alas, "All great things must come to an end."

Please be safe and update when you can.

-Danni
7/19/2009 c17 18Aoide Mnemosyne
Amazingful chapter :D I love Lex, Dom, Eric, Cole... I LOVE THEM ALL! Bwa hahahaha...

Er, anyhow..

A couple spelling errors but other from that awesome chapter! Update soon!

~Sophia
7/17/2009 c17 4Kina Kalamari
Woot! I got it right! Though Lexi seems a little young for everything that's gone on, what with the drinking, partying, etc. Still an awesome story though. =)

There's only two more chapters? Wow, things must wrap up pretty quickly.

Can't wait for more!
7/17/2009 c17 me
sorry I haven't been reviewing lately. What can I say, summer came and I got lazy. I figure this is justifiable after weeks of exams though :P

Anyways, can't believe this is coming to an end. Can't wait just to see what the conclusion will be.

I think, by the general feedback of your story Cole will win out in the end although I won't lie that I'm still routing for Dom. I've got a soft spot for him I guess. We will see I suppose. Maybe she won't end up with either. Huh...

BTW, love Eric. Poor guy's concerned for her and gets kicked in the nuts. Guess he had it coming ;) but still.

So, only two updates left, huh? Make 'em good :P
7/17/2009 c17 4SilverChelle14
Another chapter! I loved it, and I can't wait for the next one. Please post more soon! This one was great, just like all the others, and I'm glad Lexi and Dom broke up because I totally prefer Cole still, but I'm also happy that Dom is willing to try to be friends with her. MORE!
7/17/2009 c17 leigh-rohan
well..i suppose that as long as you made the ending really cute i could approve of you ending it, but when you do, how about the thought of a sequal? that could be really cool and i really love the characters so i don't really want to hav to say good bye to them :/ as for this chapter i liked it. i'm really not sure about the ending tho, as in what to expect. I mean, could the phone call have something to do with the needed guy talk? Like did an emergency happen that Eric needs to talk to the guys about how to handle Lexi? Is Eric leaving and so he wants to set everything straight for her before he leaves? I can't wait for your new post :)
7/17/2009 c17 1checkyesdana
adorable chapter =) i can't believe this is winding down. but im super excited to see how everything plays out. aka she better get with cole in the most adorable way ever.
7/17/2009 c17 1JeepersPeepersXx
Fantastic chapter!

Hehe i'm loving this story :D

Can't believe there's only two chapters left though =( I keep wanting them to go on forever.

Excellent writing, very well done

Alyss

x♥♥
7/17/2009 c17 6Summer Jasmine
haha great chapter! XD lol. get over it. yeah doubt that'll happen. haha. but seriously great job. keep it up.
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