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8/23/2008 c1 20Lenora the Great
I really liked the last few lines.

The words are so strong.

I like the fact that it rhymes...

um, Im not sure if this was your inspiration, but was this based on that poem about this guy named John or something, and he was the luckiest guy in town or the guy that everyone wanted to be... he had the perfect life... or something like that. and the last lines are how he goes home and shoots himself.

idk, It sort of reminded me of that poem.
4/11/2008 c1 30script my heart
I like that 'Pretty Ashely' shows that even though someone's life can seem so perfect everything can be up-side-down. I just hope Ashely finds something worth living for.

~smh

P.S. Why is it always 'Ashelys' that seem so perfect? It's that way with all the Ashelys I know.
4/10/2008 c1 19SomethingNifty
You continue to brighten my day with your amazingly depressive poetry. Never have I gotten so much enjoyment from reading about someone cutting their wrists! Thank you once again!

~SomethingNifty

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