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8/5/2008 c1 306Ashelin
Disturbing. Good rhyming throughout, I thought that it would end differently, because it seemed one of those poems where you were trying to declare no God, but you definitely surprised me. Though the ending was harsh, it is true. Good job, and thank you for your reviews, they are always appreciated.
6/1/2008 c1 Sincerely James
Not bad! I liked it. Not sure what to come away with after reading it though, at least not yet anyway, good job! Cheers!
4/5/2008 c1 22Poetryfreak173
That was real deep. I liked the 'holy book of lies' bit. Gave me an unwanted reality check. Thanks.

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