for A Billion Dollar Catch7/12/2013 c24 Guest
Hello, I enjoyed reading your story! I know it has been a few years since completed, but there are some major typos and a few story line errors in there. For example, in the beginning you said that Michelle was in the same grade as Harper but in later chapters said she was just entering senior year. Also such errors as 'she shit the door'. While they made me laugh are not purposefully written. :) cute story and I hope you take the time to review it
-imwaiting4myaliceandedward
Hello, I enjoyed reading your story! I know it has been a few years since completed, but there are some major typos and a few story line errors in there. For example, in the beginning you said that Michelle was in the same grade as Harper but in later chapters said she was just entering senior year. Also such errors as 'she shit the door'. While they made me laugh are not purposefully written. :) cute story and I hope you take the time to review it
-imwaiting4myaliceandedward
7/12/2013 c24 Guest
Hello, I enjoyed reading your story! I know it has been a few years since completed, but there are some major typos and a few story line errors in there. For example, in the beginning you said that Michelle was in the same grade as Harper but in later chapters said she was just entering senior year. Also such errors as 'she shit the door'. While they made me laugh are not purposefully written. :) cute story and I hope you take the time to review it
Hello, I enjoyed reading your story! I know it has been a few years since completed, but there are some major typos and a few story line errors in there. For example, in the beginning you said that Michelle was in the same grade as Harper but in later chapters said she was just entering senior year. Also such errors as 'she shit the door'. While they made me laugh are not purposefully written. :) cute story and I hope you take the time to review it
710/31/2012 c5 SecretPassion
I like the bimbos. Not them as a character just the drama they bring. Drama is good.
I like the bimbos. Not them as a character just the drama they bring. Drama is good.
8/24/2012 c24 AnonymousReads
I hated that they liked the arranged marriage, but now that you add that they didnt take over the buisness i like it. Sequel about michelle or caleb. Good story. :)
I hated that they liked the arranged marriage, but now that you add that they didnt take over the buisness i like it. Sequel about michelle or caleb. Good story. :)
12/28/2011 c1 Brightheart
like the story.
i'm not offended about the arranged marriage, but it isn't only india... (i am indian) there r other asian countries...
like the story.
i'm not offended about the arranged marriage, but it isn't only india... (i am indian) there r other asian countries...