for Bare Naked1/21/2013 c4 me
As I read this, I feel like I am watching events happen, but I don't know what's causing them. What was Angela's reason for caving to Maxim's demand?
Not knowing Maxim's reasoning is what is driving the plot. Not knowing her reason puts a hole in the plot. Surely it has to be more than a surface attraction. She's honest with herself about his looks but she says his personality is lacking in the first chapter. Why would she then be willing to draw him naked
As I read this, I feel like I am watching events happen, but I don't know what's causing them. What was Angela's reason for caving to Maxim's demand?
Not knowing Maxim's reasoning is what is driving the plot. Not knowing her reason puts a hole in the plot. Surely it has to be more than a surface attraction. She's honest with herself about his looks but she says his personality is lacking in the first chapter. Why would she then be willing to draw him naked
1/21/2013 c1 me
Since this is written in Angela's POV, I think we should see more of what she is thinking. When I read this, I dont understand why she changed her mind.
Since this is written in Angela's POV, I think we should see more of what she is thinking. When I read this, I dont understand why she changed her mind.
6/19/2012 c2 iCY the Polar Kid
That titanic reference at the end was hilarious. or IS heh. But yes it definitely is! Love it so far!
-iCY-
That titanic reference at the end was hilarious. or IS heh. But yes it definitely is! Love it so far!
-iCY-
6/19/2012 c1 iCY the Polar Kid
Heh xD Hart. I have a friend with that surname and tend to refer to him as that. And man, Maxim Hart is so weird. Not in a bad way. He's just so unpredictable at times.
Awesome!
-iCY-
Heh xD Hart. I have a friend with that surname and tend to refer to him as that. And man, Maxim Hart is so weird. Not in a bad way. He's just so unpredictable at times.
Awesome!
-iCY-
11/14/2011 c9 Alixermixer
I sooo hope that you come back and finish this story. The two of them are soo hott for each other and I just wish they could give in. I feel that Angela is going to get hurt but just as hard as Maxim plays, I thinks he probably feels as well, so he is going to make it up in a good way. I really hope that you update.
I sooo hope that you come back and finish this story. The two of them are soo hott for each other and I just wish they could give in. I feel that Angela is going to get hurt but just as hard as Maxim plays, I thinks he probably feels as well, so he is going to make it up in a good way. I really hope that you update.
7/21/2011 c9 
9Soule Rellim
I've been reading this story since the beginning, and I've got to say, one of the best romance stories I've had the pleasure of reading on this site. I was so excited when I saw you had an update.. can't believe it took me 4 months to notice! I really adore the way you describe the scenes the dialogue sequences are so well put together - I wish I could write as effortlessly as you seem to! :)
-MB Louis
9Soule RellimI've been reading this story since the beginning, and I've got to say, one of the best romance stories I've had the pleasure of reading on this site. I was so excited when I saw you had an update.. can't believe it took me 4 months to notice! I really adore the way you describe the scenes the dialogue sequences are so well put together - I wish I could write as effortlessly as you seem to! :)
-MB Louis
7/20/2011 c9 jojo.102
This is a fabulous story...Please update!
This is a fabulous story...Please update!