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6/8/2008 c6 4Lorango911
oh yeah. most definitely need an update soon! juicy!
6/8/2008 c6 8PandasAreCute
Oh, it's getting heated huh?

I wonder how this will turn out.

I like it, seem's he's really trying to impress her and all.
6/7/2008 c6 arreyn emme
Whoa! Hot. Very good development of chemistry and love the art aspect.
6/6/2008 c6 theslykit
haha finally some action ey? ^^
6/4/2008 c6 2SecretFeelings
i like him like this better...
6/1/2008 c6 5BeingMyself
Agh! Way to cute it off at the good stuff.
6/1/2008 c6 Diamond
This is a sweet chapter. love the story.
6/1/2008 c6 BasketCase101
omgomgomgomg

i enjoyed this chapter so much!
6/1/2008 c6 7Salt and Vinegar Pringles
Oh no! She's not going to- ? Hahaha, well, wow. Didn't really expect that. Interested to see where your going to go from here!
6/1/2008 c6 xbrunnettex0
ughh oh. what happens. i bet one of them ruin it. im betting its Maxim this time.
6/1/2008 c6 3Queen Of Laughs
good chapter...

:D

oh and did they have sex at the end of this chapter... just asking cause the last line kinda implies that... at least in my mind...

:D post asap!
6/1/2008 c6 sillyome
i really do and do not want to know what would happen next, i'll be pessitimistic and expect the worst. =]] surprise me and update soon
6/1/2008 c6 3emotionless-stares
o0o, such a romantic dinner huh.. I wonder what's going to happen now..
6/1/2008 c6 2MeZzeDUpGuRL
Chap 1

“Are we fighting already? I don’t even know YOU'RE name yet,” he said, leaning his arms on the table. He wasn’t even phased that I had thrown all of his things onto the floor.

-I think that should be 'your'.

Chap 2

“No! I would never kiss you Maxim, as long as I LIVED. Get that crazy idea out of your head,” I said trying to walk away. He grabbed my wrist and pulled me back towards him, just like I hoped he would.

-I think that should be 'live'.

Chap 5

“I’m sure he’ll have plenty to pick from. There seems to be a surplus of girls clinging to his every movement, he’ll HE just fine,” I assured him. Isaac shrugged his shoulders and shifted his weight in his desk.

-I think that should be 'be'.

-

All in all, i think it's a good story.

What did you mean they didn't make it through dinner?

Did they possibly...do that?

Wow, talk about fast. Heeheh

Well, Maxim wanting to be drawn nude was the one that pulled me to the story (you wrote it on the summary) since it's not a common thing for a lead guy to do.

Oh, and i really don't think them saying 'shut the fuck up' is good. It sounds a lot nicer if you just erase the f-word. Hehe.

Hm, what else? OH yeah~ I like Norah Jones!

well, that's it. ^^

See yahh~~

-Jessi
6/1/2008 c6 nennella
Love your story, but carino is for a guy, carina is for a girl!
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