for Bare Naked5/12/2008 c5 Guest
haha, funny. update soon~
haha, funny. update soon~
5/11/2008 c5 
14demented cookies
*sigh* this is nice. I've read so many crappy stories on this site i forgot what it's like to read a really good one. i was so relieved to see this new chapter! keep writing! this is really great!
14demented cookies*sigh* this is nice. I've read so many crappy stories on this site i forgot what it's like to read a really good one. i was so relieved to see this new chapter! keep writing! this is really great!
5/11/2008 c5 7Salt and Vinegar Pringles
Lovely update! I like how you've given a bit of resistance to Angela against Maxim; like, she knows he affects her but she's still got the sense to push him away - it's so much more interesting than her being absolutely floored by him. I'm hoping she doesn't say yes to being drawn... naked, anyway. I think it'd be more spectacular if it was something else that was more... covered ^^. Haha, anyway, absolutely loving the story, and am looking forward to another update!
7Salt and Vinegar PringlesLovely update! I like how you've given a bit of resistance to Angela against Maxim; like, she knows he affects her but she's still got the sense to push him away - it's so much more interesting than her being absolutely floored by him. I'm hoping she doesn't say yes to being drawn... naked, anyway. I think it'd be more spectacular if it was something else that was more... covered ^^. Haha, anyway, absolutely loving the story, and am looking forward to another update!
5/11/2008 c5 kellerz
you haven't read twilight? ah. you are missing out on life, seriously.
but anyways. thanks for the update! though i'm not gonna lie, i'm kind of hating maxim so far. maybe his personality will change as the story goes on? I hope so.
you haven't read twilight? ah. you are missing out on life, seriously.
but anyways. thanks for the update! though i'm not gonna lie, i'm kind of hating maxim so far. maybe his personality will change as the story goes on? I hope so.
5/11/2008 c5 3Queen Of Laughs
i cant wait for more!
:D
i kinda actually wanna see him draw her naked- to see if he gets affected the same way she does...
oh and is this a bet- him liking her and hanging out with her... like in the movie Shes all that... (at least i think thats whats its called with Freddie Prince Jr.)
3Queen Of Laughsi cant wait for more!
:D
i kinda actually wanna see him draw her naked- to see if he gets affected the same way she does...
oh and is this a bet- him liking her and hanging out with her... like in the movie Shes all that... (at least i think thats whats its called with Freddie Prince Jr.)
5/11/2008 c5 3emotionless-stares
Lol, omg what bad timing. Anyway, she's really starting to dislike him more and more. I would be a sap too if I ever saw a guy like him lol. I empathize her. Update soon! This is good.
3emotionless-staresLol, omg what bad timing. Anyway, she's really starting to dislike him more and more. I would be a sap too if I ever saw a guy like him lol. I empathize her. Update soon! This is good.
5/11/2008 c5 14Dimunda
im so glad you updated! i love this chapter too! please hurry and update as soon as you possibly can! :)
14Dimundaim so glad you updated! i love this chapter too! please hurry and update as soon as you possibly can! :)
5/11/2008 c5 1GNIP
o.o Twilight is my favorite book, u're definitely have to read it. Edward Cullen... DROOL lol
1GNIPo.o Twilight is my favorite book, u're definitely have to read it. Edward Cullen... DROOL lol
5/11/2008 c5 24stargazerlost
Ooh, a near kiss scene, so cute! Aww, being ignored by her mother because she wants to be an artist rather than some lawyer is so sad. I'm glad she keeps at her drawings, even if no one supports her at home. I wonder what he has planned for her, and how he is going to get her to change her mind about going. I can't wait to see what happens, I bet it's going to be really good. I'm still curious as to why he's taking such an interest in her, but everyone has to wait to find out the good stuff.
24stargazerlostOoh, a near kiss scene, so cute! Aww, being ignored by her mother because she wants to be an artist rather than some lawyer is so sad. I'm glad she keeps at her drawings, even if no one supports her at home. I wonder what he has planned for her, and how he is going to get her to change her mind about going. I can't wait to see what happens, I bet it's going to be really good. I'm still curious as to why he's taking such an interest in her, but everyone has to wait to find out the good stuff.
5/11/2008 c5 xbrunnettex0
u like cliff hangers dont u? haha ilove this story. hope u update soon. oh yess and twilight is my favorite book. you should deff read it
u like cliff hangers dont u? haha ilove this story. hope u update soon. oh yess and twilight is my favorite book. you should deff read it
5/9/2008 c4 17x-zai
haha this is hilarious!
i actually like how its a bit unrealistic..i get the crush thing you said...
maxim + bart are so cute too haha
update soon! :)
17x-zaihaha this is hilarious!
i actually like how its a bit unrealistic..i get the crush thing you said...
maxim + bart are so cute too haha
update soon! :)
5/7/2008 c4 1GNIP
I really enjoy the beginning of this story, it is really cute. I can't wait for you to write more. ^_~ don't give up on this story please!
1GNIPI really enjoy the beginning of this story, it is really cute. I can't wait for you to write more. ^_~ don't give up on this story please!
5/7/2008 c4 teagarden
I like this story, and I enjoy your writing style. I hope that you get a chance to update soon!
I like this story, and I enjoy your writing style. I hope that you get a chance to update soon!