
4/9/2008 c1
6The Abstract Dualist
The hell? Okay...really short, too short really to have a point. Honestly, bits of it just sound kind of awkward, not too funny...was this improv? I don't think it translates very well to the page, regardless. Also, the ending is just disturbing for a comedy.

The hell? Okay...really short, too short really to have a point. Honestly, bits of it just sound kind of awkward, not too funny...was this improv? I don't think it translates very well to the page, regardless. Also, the ending is just disturbing for a comedy.