for Wrong Number8/9/2008 c16 ejafweofj
I think chap 15 was a good ending, chap 16 being too...
cheesy? I don't know, cheesiness is good, in moderation, so maybe toning it down a little... :/ I don't know...
but I love the story overall, :D It's amazing.
I think chap 15 was a good ending, chap 16 being too...
cheesy? I don't know, cheesiness is good, in moderation, so maybe toning it down a little... :/ I don't know...
but I love the story overall, :D It's amazing.
8/9/2008 c16 
4January Skies
Cute ending! ^^ I loved the whole story, and I'm glad you didn't overdo it or drag it out. It was an over all awesome story.
4January SkiesCute ending! ^^ I loved the whole story, and I'm glad you didn't overdo it or drag it out. It was an over all awesome story.
8/8/2008 c16 xbrunnettex0
the ending is alright. at first i got confused i didnt know it was in the future. i wish u showed what happned between them. but its alrightt im happy with the ending.
the ending is alright. at first i got confused i didnt know it was in the future. i wish u showed what happned between them. but its alrightt im happy with the ending.
8/8/2008 c16 Guest
It's not crap. :)
It's not crap. :)
8/8/2008 c16 N.M.E
I think the ending was good. Aw...you're done. That's great! Loved the fic! Love you!
I think the ending was good. Aw...you're done. That's great! Loved the fic! Love you!
8/8/2008 c16 22Kohlomere
I guess I should've seen it coming but I wasn't really expecting it to end so quickly. Kinda blind-sided me. Maybe a real date would have helped but it was really sweet anyway.
Great work,
E.
22KohlomereI guess I should've seen it coming but I wasn't really expecting it to end so quickly. Kinda blind-sided me. Maybe a real date would have helped but it was really sweet anyway.
Great work,
E.
8/8/2008 c16 cyanidecandy
ahh confusing ending D:
sorry i'm a bit slow today.
so archie and isobell got married ?
or was it some set-up by mickey as a movie thing. :S
conused ! ah.
but i still love it :)
this story was really cute.
ahh confusing ending D:
sorry i'm a bit slow today.
so archie and isobell got married ?
or was it some set-up by mickey as a movie thing. :S
conused ! ah.
but i still love it :)
this story was really cute.
8/8/2008 c16 Roman Candles
I loved the ending! I can't believe this is the last chapter. It is a great story. Keep writing!
I loved the ending! I can't believe this is the last chapter. It is a great story. Keep writing!
8/8/2008 c16 3Essevera
If it's The End, the status should say 'Complete'. Nice ending, but you should've filled in the space between Ch 15 and Ch 16.
Congrats on finished story!
3EsseveraIf it's The End, the status should say 'Complete'. Nice ending, but you should've filled in the space between Ch 15 and Ch 16.
Congrats on finished story!
8/8/2008 c16 misfit09
I think you should definatly consider publishing this.
Its a great story i loved reading every chapter.
I think you should definatly consider publishing this.
Its a great story i loved reading every chapter.
8/8/2008 c16 Rumsha
well that was a fast ending! the beginning was confusing i didnt get it..but wow 9 months can go so far haha.
well that was a fast ending! the beginning was confusing i didnt get it..but wow 9 months can go so far haha.
8/8/2008 c16 Dreams of death by Chocolat
Wow great ending!
It's seems perfect, except for the beginning where it's slightly confusing, but as I read it became clear.
I'd say you did very well with this story, it was a fun read.
Wow great ending!
It's seems perfect, except for the beginning where it's slightly confusing, but as I read it became clear.
I'd say you did very well with this story, it was a fun read.
8/8/2008 c16 KelseyBell910
I was kinda confused about the ending. But otherwise this story has been really good.
I was kinda confused about the ending. But otherwise this story has been really good.
8/8/2008 c16 50fairEtales
wait. that last bit confused me.
was the whole story a screenplay for a movie?
ahh. i feel so dumb.
or was mickey just making it into a screenplay?
haha. otherwise it was really cute.
50fairEtaleswait. that last bit confused me.
was the whole story a screenplay for a movie?
ahh. i feel so dumb.
or was mickey just making it into a screenplay?
haha. otherwise it was really cute.