10/7/2012 c15 3TheClosetWriter16
By the end...you don't really mean THE END. Do you?
haha Great chapter! loved the slap/kiss haha
By the end...you don't really mean THE END. Do you?
haha Great chapter! loved the slap/kiss haha
10/6/2012 c15 Bubbly Girl
Maybe an epilogue could clear it up a little more. :) Great story! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
Bubbly Girl
Maybe an epilogue could clear it up a little more. :) Great story! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
Bubbly Girl
10/6/2012 c15 standuptome
Not a totally satisfying endingn to their story, but good enough... it seems to simple... to many unopened holes... but at the same time it is an ending. \
Good job!
Not a totally satisfying endingn to their story, but good enough... it seems to simple... to many unopened holes... but at the same time it is an ending. \
Good job!
9/23/2012 c14 Bubbly Girl
Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
Bubbly Girl
Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
Bubbly Girl
9/12/2012 c14 twilightwinter
Plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz keep writing it's an awesome story :)))
Plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz keep writing it's an awesome story :)))
9/11/2012 c14 3StaNdUPtomE
Yes, I could see that being problematic...
Well I loved it and can't wait for more! I couldn't decide if I wanted Isobell to meet up with Archie or not. I probably would have not... wouldn't have been able to deal with it. But she is right, it would be a coulda woulda shoulda for the rest of your life.
Yes, I could see that being problematic...
Well I loved it and can't wait for more! I couldn't decide if I wanted Isobell to meet up with Archie or not. I probably would have not... wouldn't have been able to deal with it. But she is right, it would be a coulda woulda shoulda for the rest of your life.
8/2/2012 c12 6deadkitty1
I knew their date was too good to be true. But hopefully he won't give up on her. :)
I knew their date was too good to be true. But hopefully he won't give up on her. :)