6/7/2012 c12 1Sparrowdaugther
I've been reading this story for a while, the problem was that my laptop wouldn't let me write reviews for a while! So I want to say AMAZING story! And it's been FOREVER since you're last chapter, which I ADORED, but it's okay. This chapter was intriguing and completely amazing- I enjoyed them meeting each other even though it ended in disaster. And it's good that Archie has finally admitted to his problem. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Loyal Reader,
Sparrowdaughter
I've been reading this story for a while, the problem was that my laptop wouldn't let me write reviews for a while! So I want to say AMAZING story! And it's been FOREVER since you're last chapter, which I ADORED, but it's okay. This chapter was intriguing and completely amazing- I enjoyed them meeting each other even though it ended in disaster. And it's good that Archie has finally admitted to his problem. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Loyal Reader,
Sparrowdaughter
6/6/2012 c12 zeeniya
Im sorry if I was too mean ... :D
but I really like this story ...
they way you've pulled it this far and all those ridges to the characters have made them incredibly human to me ...
Well done! you've made this into one of those stories you want to read from time to time to devour and feed on ...
this chapter was good.
seriously ! I enjoyed the pace and the way things unfolded...
XXX anxious for next chapter...
I hope and pray (lol) that you'll update soon.
Love and best wishes.
Zee.
Im sorry if I was too mean ... :D
but I really like this story ...
they way you've pulled it this far and all those ridges to the characters have made them incredibly human to me ...
Well done! you've made this into one of those stories you want to read from time to time to devour and feed on ...
this chapter was good.
seriously ! I enjoyed the pace and the way things unfolded...
XXX anxious for next chapter...
I hope and pray (lol) that you'll update soon.
Love and best wishes.
Zee.
6/6/2012 c12 mylittleprincess
update very fast please.
update very fast please.
6/6/2012 c12 nevermore1330
Please don't make us waite to long befor u update again love this plot keep up the good work
Please don't make us waite to long befor u update again love this plot keep up the good work
6/6/2012 c12 gypsygirl615
Wow (fantastic baby DANCE). That's all I can say. You write extremely well. I am just blown away. Please update soon.
Wow (fantastic baby DANCE). That's all I can say. You write extremely well. I am just blown away. Please update soon.
5/22/2012 c11 zeeniya
C'mOn!
you said you were ready with more chapters since Dec...
Its been darn long!
plzzz... this is a wonderful story to which you had me hooked since last year...
For the love of God give us an update soon ...
Its pretty clear how much of the story is still out there...
Quit torturing.
Please.
C'mOn!
you said you were ready with more chapters since Dec...
Its been darn long!
plzzz... this is a wonderful story to which you had me hooked since last year...
For the love of God give us an update soon ...
Its pretty clear how much of the story is still out there...
Quit torturing.
Please.
3/23/2012 c10 runner
O.O that was good! i just hope they meet soon! ^.^
O.O that was good! i just hope they meet soon! ^.^
3/23/2012 c10 Sarcasm's-last-refuge
hello, i'm loving your story so far, it's the first one i started to read on fictionpress(seeing as i only just got an account and decided to read some stories). It's extremely well written, though some of the language Archie uses does sound quite British(ex:saying he "rang her up" instead of called her). the story plot is interesting, how did you ever manage to come up with the idea for the main plot(a misdialed call turning into a friendship)? i also really enjoy the characters, Archie being the regular playboy artist/actor with a painful/dark past, but with the twist of him not being full of himself and wanting to do smaller movies instead of climbing the social/movie ladder and Isobell(an interesting variation of the name by the way)being the ambitious(job-wise), kind hearted woman she is, trying to stay upbeat and positive after being cheated on. One thing i noticed though, was that Marcie had been Isobell's friend since they were young so did Marcie move with her to NY or did she move earlier/later? just to clarify that... anyways, love the story, can't wait to read more!
PS. did you still need a Beta? if so, i would be more than willing to help with Beta-ing or anything else for that matter.
hello, i'm loving your story so far, it's the first one i started to read on fictionpress(seeing as i only just got an account and decided to read some stories). It's extremely well written, though some of the language Archie uses does sound quite British(ex:saying he "rang her up" instead of called her). the story plot is interesting, how did you ever manage to come up with the idea for the main plot(a misdialed call turning into a friendship)? i also really enjoy the characters, Archie being the regular playboy artist/actor with a painful/dark past, but with the twist of him not being full of himself and wanting to do smaller movies instead of climbing the social/movie ladder and Isobell(an interesting variation of the name by the way)being the ambitious(job-wise), kind hearted woman she is, trying to stay upbeat and positive after being cheated on. One thing i noticed though, was that Marcie had been Isobell's friend since they were young so did Marcie move with her to NY or did she move earlier/later? just to clarify that... anyways, love the story, can't wait to read more!
PS. did you still need a Beta? if so, i would be more than willing to help with Beta-ing or anything else for that matter.
11/19/2011 c10 mylittleprincess
Cant wait for more.
Cant wait for more.