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9/27/2008 c10 1HisFiestyBeauty
I am loving this story! I can not wait to read more!
9/18/2008 c1 Pea-Carrots
Ilove this chapter its so like a fairytale in real life. You are such an awsome writer. You should continue.
9/5/2008 c8 HisFiestyBeauty
Wow great story! Im dying to read more!
4/27/2008 c2 Dakota.347
Ok as critism your grammar and spelling was a bit off in some places. but i loved the beginning really captured me. keep posting.

dakota
4/9/2008 c1 Blank Pages
I really like what you're going for here, but I'd recommend a really thorough clean up of the story and summary. I would stay away from "u" as a replacement for "you", and a lot of your grammar was off. For some reason, in the last few paragraphs, you left out "I" a lot, and made numerous mistakes. Before that it was pretty good.

Anyway, I'm just recommending a good spelling/grammar check, maybe a beta, you know.

I hope you'll take my words as advice, and not insults... Thank you.

-Blank Pages

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