for Here Today Gone Tomorrow8/6/2008 c1 
3enchanting eclipse
I like this story, the characters are portrayed very well. Thanks for reveiewing my story, I rewrote parts of the chapter, but I'm think about just starting over or maybe removing it all together. I know that the "goth girl" image that I gave her and the way she acts isn't original and pretty much boring, but I was thinking of just making the story light. Anways, I hope you update this soon, I think it has a lot of potential. =)
3enchanting eclipseI like this story, the characters are portrayed very well. Thanks for reveiewing my story, I rewrote parts of the chapter, but I'm think about just starting over or maybe removing it all together. I know that the "goth girl" image that I gave her and the way she acts isn't original and pretty much boring, but I was thinking of just making the story light. Anways, I hope you update this soon, I think it has a lot of potential. =)
6/21/2008 c1 1CorporationCrazy
He does seem like a prick, but i wouldn't call him that, i would call him an asshole, but that's just me.
ANYWAYS! Update soon, I love the story.
A few grammar mistakes, but not tons like SOME stories i've seen.
1CorporationCrazyHe does seem like a prick, but i wouldn't call him that, i would call him an asshole, but that's just me.
ANYWAYS! Update soon, I love the story.
A few grammar mistakes, but not tons like SOME stories i've seen.
6/17/2008 c1 2iPod
YOU HAVE TO UPDATEE! :D
LIKE ASAP! [email protected] When she was coloring hello kitty xD
Yesh, being at a family reunion does make you do crazy psychotic things. :D
2iPodYOU HAVE TO UPDATEE! :D
LIKE ASAP! [email protected] When she was coloring hello kitty xD
Yesh, being at a family reunion does make you do crazy psychotic things. :D
4/10/2008 c1 2Crystal.Chain
Wow, this isn't bad! Please continue with it, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
2Crystal.ChainWow, this isn't bad! Please continue with it, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!