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8/11/2008 c9 Guest
This is top quality writing. Excellent detail, great choice of words.

I can't wait to know what the dream means!
8/11/2008 c9 Isobel Kelte
The writing of this section is amazing. The dream had me on the edge of my seat, and even now I am trying to figure out what this could mean for the story. Please update soon!
7/15/2008 c8 Isobel Kelte
Another amazing chapter. I was chilled to the bone at that last part; I could almost feel Thanas's horror and shock of facing such a situation after the calm tedium of his and Lyanth's journey back.

In all of that, I love how you subtly continue to flesh out the culture of the people of the mountain, with, "The young and old of the village gathered around the bonfire on their knees, the closest thing to mourning," and "The people of the mountains did not joke, especially over such matters. "
7/15/2008 c8 godsdaughter77
Wow! That was intense at the end. I really want to know what is going on. I love how you explain how Lyanth views her home. That was great description and really showed how she viewed the world. Looking forward to the next update.
7/14/2008 c7 Isobel Kelte
This is an amazing story! The plot, while remaining subtle, it gripping, and the world you're slowly painting for the reader is unique and vivid. Even better are the characters; I especially love the interaction between Elthan and Candon. I remain eagerly looking forward to the next chapter. Great work!
7/11/2008 c7 godsdaughter77
I really thought this chapter was well written. I absolutely loved the letter and the conversation at the beginning of the chapter. Especially the line talking about being dead in a glorious ditch. :D Great chapter looking forward to more!
7/11/2008 c6 godsdaughter77
The character of Jaime is excellent! You described him really well. Also, I am really curious about what Adela's duty is and what secrets she protects.
7/11/2008 c5 godsdaughter77
Wow! The creature or thing sounds both scary and enticing. I wonder what it is...? Great chapter!
7/11/2008 c4 godsdaughter77
I thought the conversations in this chapter were fantastic. They were both believable and well paced. Great chapter!
7/11/2008 c1 godsdaughter77
I really liked this chapter and I thought you did well in how you described how Lyanth 'sees' the world.
6/10/2008 c6 3Hannah Rose Williams
This was a beautiful chapter. Perfection. The culture that filtered through the conversation, the snappy dialogue, the depth of the characters. Yay!
6/10/2008 c5 Hannah Rose Williams
Sounds like you've created an AWESOME monster! And, dare I say it... the kind that a blind girl could defeat?
5/1/2008 c4 Hannah Rose Williams
Oops! You missed a verb: "...the island nation of Aneron [WAS?] a land..."

At this point, I'm really hungry for a description of this country/these countries and how they work. Please? Are they all in the same land, or is Elthan about to invade the land of another character's?

Write more soon! I'll try to keep up.

God bless!
5/1/2008 c3 Hannah Rose Williams
Wow! The tapestry is a great illustration. Er, I'm sure there's a more specific literary term for what kind of tool you used there... but whatever it is, I like it a lot!

The empress is very intriguing, also. Love love.
5/1/2008 c2 Hannah Rose Williams
"Don't we all?" Nice clincher for this chapter.

Caravel... Care... Paravel? ;)
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