for I Need You4/10/2008 c1 
13Shasta Valentine
so when i read poems like this, people usually use pretty and descriptive words to describe why they feel this way or even the amount of despair they hold.
but in this case, you didn't have to.
i like this poem, it's honest and direct.
which is the stuff of good poetry.
keep writing!
-sv
13Shasta Valentineso when i read poems like this, people usually use pretty and descriptive words to describe why they feel this way or even the amount of despair they hold.
but in this case, you didn't have to.
i like this poem, it's honest and direct.
which is the stuff of good poetry.
keep writing!
-sv
4/10/2008 c1 older ego
Ohh this sounds exactly like what one of my friends and i are goig through atm... good job... makes me feel rly sad though..
Ohh this sounds exactly like what one of my friends and i are goig through atm... good job... makes me feel rly sad though..