for take me away8/7/2008 c1 
5Rainfall Complexity
I LOVE THIS.
I don't have much more to say, other than it's brilliant and beats my poetry by far. The clever wordplay and occasional rhymes and pretty flow just make this poem so powerful and emotion. I love it. LOVE IT. You own my soul.
[[Suki]]
5Rainfall ComplexityI LOVE THIS.
I don't have much more to say, other than it's brilliant and beats my poetry by far. The clever wordplay and occasional rhymes and pretty flow just make this poem so powerful and emotion. I love it. LOVE IT. You own my soul.
[[Suki]]
7/8/2008 c1 91fairytale failure
Once again - this also has the unique style that makes your poems stand out. I especially like the imagery in this one; I enjoyed the first six stanzas more than the last two. I found the last one a little bit difficult to understand, perhaps due to a few technical mistakes? The beginning - 'My love, quiet / conqueror of / my heart - / I know you / not.' - sounds almost Shakespearean to me, and I love how you expressed feelings in the sixth stanza. Beautiful.
91fairytale failureOnce again - this also has the unique style that makes your poems stand out. I especially like the imagery in this one; I enjoyed the first six stanzas more than the last two. I found the last one a little bit difficult to understand, perhaps due to a few technical mistakes? The beginning - 'My love, quiet / conqueror of / my heart - / I know you / not.' - sounds almost Shakespearean to me, and I love how you expressed feelings in the sixth stanza. Beautiful.
4/11/2008 c1 1Melanie Thomas
Ah! zomg! This screams unique...out of all the poems I've faved today, I think this is really my absolute FAVORITE...from the first line I was caught...usually I'm like bored saying *sigh* "typical..." but your poem^^...zomg!..."to be mowed down by you, taken"so "I can be a butterfly"...as if that dominance somehow makes you...more beautiful? different? Not just any other flower in the batch? but then your ending line.."a disgrace"...as if these feelings both uplift and degrade at the same time. Wow...LOVED IT! You got talent man!
1Melanie ThomasAh! zomg! This screams unique...out of all the poems I've faved today, I think this is really my absolute FAVORITE...from the first line I was caught...usually I'm like bored saying *sigh* "typical..." but your poem^^...zomg!..."to be mowed down by you, taken"so "I can be a butterfly"...as if that dominance somehow makes you...more beautiful? different? Not just any other flower in the batch? but then your ending line.."a disgrace"...as if these feelings both uplift and degrade at the same time. Wow...LOVED IT! You got talent man!
4/10/2008 c1 115Random-Idiocity
Wow this was really good. ''speechless, without a sound. I sit here, waiting to be found.'' Excellent poem. Keep it Up!
115Random-IdiocityWow this was really good. ''speechless, without a sound. I sit here, waiting to be found.'' Excellent poem. Keep it Up!