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7/7/2008 c1 395softersin
Very angsty, and evil. I loved every bit of it :) Keep it up.
5/14/2008 c1 7sourgummyworms2007
this is a sad poem. well i take this as a sad poem. ur watching from the sidelines as someone u care about is with someone else. i can understand, but not feel the pain of the auther.
4/28/2008 c1 50Andrea Lotte
I really like the jelly bit (I'm sorry...I'm British. I just HAVE to call it jelly.) I really like the imagery (though I don't like the tortilla bit...it doesn't really fit.)

Other than that, good work!
4/11/2008 c1 13Shasta Valentine
i hate it when people use food as in poetry.

it just doesn't fit.

however

i do like everything but the tortilla bit in yours.

good job, and GREAT execution.

-sv
4/11/2008 c1 174a silenced revolution
Lovely imagery and word choice. I like the question of from whose perspective this is. Nice.

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