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12/18/2008 c1 64fatbird33
i liked the contrast between the two stanzas!
6/30/2008 c1 173Little girl Big world
even if its not what you had originally planned...it was still really good & i enjoyed reading it!
4/20/2008 c1 50Kristina Suko
Gah... slow computer... anyway. Such a romantic yet sad little poem. It turned out nicely, even if it isn't what you had intended it to be. I hate it when that happens- poems or stories get away from you. :D That's what happened to... oh... one of my poems... sad day, I can't remember the name of it. Oh well. Oh! The Land of Despair and Dreams. I think that's the one.

But enough of my rambling. Nice poem :)

~Maranwe Telrunya
4/11/2008 c1 27Edensong
I really like this! It pertains to my life a lot. Honestly? I admit I'd pick the happy lie, just because at the moment I'm living the painful truth and it's, to be inarticulate and redundant but accurate... really painful. But I do see exactly what you mean. It's a very simple but well-worded piece.
4/11/2008 c1 Throwaway 1276
Good Job!

It was really great!

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