for Hell Hounds4/23/2009 c1 
4Jenn0509
Hey! I found you! I love this story! I made the mistake of reading it in the dark and I felt like I was there! So cool!
Good Job!
-Jenn(Amanda)
P.S. Don't forget to check out my stories, I just added a new one!
4Jenn0509Hey! I found you! I love this story! I made the mistake of reading it in the dark and I felt like I was there! So cool!
Good Job!
-Jenn(Amanda)
P.S. Don't forget to check out my stories, I just added a new one!
8/14/2008 c1 4A.V.B
Um...I got chills down my spine! It's good thing that I didn't read this at night, I'd have nightmares! Good Story!
4A.V.BUm...I got chills down my spine! It's good thing that I didn't read this at night, I'd have nightmares! Good Story!
6/22/2008 c1 15Lorki
Good descriptive style overall, though it seemed like a few things were sort of repetitive.
Nice story though
-Lorki
15LorkiGood descriptive style overall, though it seemed like a few things were sort of repetitive.
Nice story though
-Lorki
5/14/2008 c1 2Rokhi
Hola! See, I told you I'd eventually get to reading this! So your friend wrote this? It's pretty good. I'm always up for a nice, bloody story to gloom up a miserably sunny day!
First of all, the detail is astoundingly vivid. Naught but the grimmest of sights was left to the imagination.
I do think that at least one of the larger paragraphs could've stood to be split up a little bit, but other than that and a few minor mishaps, everything looks pretty good.
Thank you for posting this, and tell your friend I enjoyed her story!
2RokhiHola! See, I told you I'd eventually get to reading this! So your friend wrote this? It's pretty good. I'm always up for a nice, bloody story to gloom up a miserably sunny day!
First of all, the detail is astoundingly vivid. Naught but the grimmest of sights was left to the imagination.
I do think that at least one of the larger paragraphs could've stood to be split up a little bit, but other than that and a few minor mishaps, everything looks pretty good.
Thank you for posting this, and tell your friend I enjoyed her story!