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5/30/2008 c1 18Peevxwm Vaj
It's a haiku. Very clever. I echo Calidris's review: the last line provides a triviality that contrasts beautifully with the philosophical reverie of the narrator - like two different worlds albeit the same scenery. And it is funny. The last line echoes like the punchline of a joke; it also justifies the title. I liked it.
4/15/2008 c1 25moon-behind-dark-clouds
the same scenery and oh so different realities. that was funny!

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