9/9/2010 c8 i v o r y w i n g s
I like the dialogue better because it shows more feeling between David and Meg!

The more they converse, the more we see from them. I think the descriptions could be useful, just not all the time.

I'm liking the rewriting!

9/4/2010 c7 zoba20
aw such a hoot dream but i still hate the mother ^^

thanx for the pm

9/4/2010 c7 1inkspots
I am loving each and every revamped chapter of your rewrite ♥ I feel like I'm falling in love with your characters and your story all over again (:

9/2/2010 c6 Aneesha
Loved the chapter.

Bedroom scene.. To cuute! :D

big changes? Hmm wonder what they might be.

Good chapter :D

9/2/2010 c6 2musingSanity
This is an amazing story. You have got to update. No pressure of cource:P

9/1/2010 c5 zoba20
yay so glad u updated , i so can't wait and see how different this editing is going to be ^^

9/1/2010 c5 Aneesha
Almost forgot how much of a bitch Darlene is.

Poor Meg :)

I like how sweet David is with her though :)

and I luurve Rufus :D