for Making Him Believe4/14/2008 c1 
4Faithfully Connected
Hey the story was good except some part were a bit confusing. You should make the transition from the airport to the plane a bit better and when she is in her apartment that was confusing too just make it clearer. Other than that, great story keep on writing
4Faithfully ConnectedHey the story was good except some part were a bit confusing. You should make the transition from the airport to the plane a bit better and when she is in her apartment that was confusing too just make it clearer. Other than that, great story keep on writing
4/14/2008 c1 MySunshine
well, this was very interesting ^^
i loved it!
they both would make a cute couple ^^
so ... i like your storyline, too, and i'll be looking forward to reading more ^^
well, this was very interesting ^^
i loved it!
they both would make a cute couple ^^
so ... i like your storyline, too, and i'll be looking forward to reading more ^^
4/14/2008 c1 3Den-KitStock
Bad, David! lying to his mother, if she finds out he will be so dead! Haha
3Den-KitStockBad, David! lying to his mother, if she finds out he will be so dead! Haha
4/14/2008 c1 18AnneGirl15
Very good first chapter. This lookes like a very promising story. Can't wait for the next chapter :) ~Anne P.S. If you could check out some of my work I would greatly appreciate it :)
18AnneGirl15Very good first chapter. This lookes like a very promising story. Can't wait for the next chapter :) ~Anne P.S. If you could check out some of my work I would greatly appreciate it :)
4/14/2008 c1 Hopelessly Clueless
Oh, this seems like it's going to be a VERY interesting story!
'Megan, pearl of my heart, dimple in my smile, song in my soul. Please?”' That bit was hilarious! I loved it!
Can't wait to read on, update soon! :D
Oh, this seems like it's going to be a VERY interesting story!
'Megan, pearl of my heart, dimple in my smile, song in my soul. Please?”' That bit was hilarious! I loved it!
Can't wait to read on, update soon! :D