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8/22/2008 c1 5YellowShootingStar
aw...this was beautiful, and creative, and sad in a happy way. or happy in a sad way. loved it. and really poetic. and lucky u! finding that one someone. or two someones. great job! i love the line 'because this is how a broken heart heals' that was great and creative. and very steal-ly. like i could gobble it up and steal it. but i wont. haha. okay, i have no idea what im saying. umm just that this was good and i lvoed it!
4/19/2008 c1 31writingxonxwalls
I loved how you compared the fairytales to real life. Andhow that some people can change your mind. Wonderful topic for your song. My only suggestion would be maybe you should add spaces, so it doesn't seem so overwheleming. But that's just a suggestion. (:

-Brittany

ps. review marathon going on right now! check out my profile for a link! (:
4/14/2008 c1 115Random-Idiocity
Great song, there's some wonderful imagery in here. Keep it Up!

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