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4/14/2008 c1 59Tranquil Thorns
Pretty cute!

I love the way you ended - the cycle continues, doesn't it?

My only problem here is that some of the rhyming here seems a little forced - 'hug' and 'thug', 'bread' and 'shed', for instance. But, since this is a humorous poem, I guess you can get away with it.

Keep on writing. =P

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