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6/11/2008 c1 29Ashley Hyperkins
This is a really powerful poem... and I know that this is going to sound stupid but I mean it in a much... deeper... way: The emotion is portrayed really well, not just in the words, but also in the lack of definite rhythm at the begining, and the sort of rhythm (is that how you spell it?) at the end. This is a great poem, and one of my favorites!
6/5/2008 c1 22instantramen
Emotional and it's messed up how well I can relate to these feelings. Kudos.

Btw, awesome penname, made me giggle. :D
5/26/2008 c1 116createanarchy
God i know the feeling, and you get it across so well :D well done

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