for Give Us a Chance8/15/2009 c1 
5storm42
I recently read through "Whatever it Takes" and, while I was a bit disappointed that you never finished it, I was glad to hear that you were working on a rewrite.
I love Max's character. He's so cute and... lovable. =D I really hope that you update this story.
~Storm
5storm42I recently read through "Whatever it Takes" and, while I was a bit disappointed that you never finished it, I was glad to hear that you were working on a rewrite.
I love Max's character. He's so cute and... lovable. =D I really hope that you update this story.
~Storm
4/23/2008 c1 1Fuji Syusuke
Yay, that was awesome. I hope with the new rewrite comes more updates, I can't wait to read more!
1Fuji SyusukeYay, that was awesome. I hope with the new rewrite comes more updates, I can't wait to read more!
4/20/2008 c1 chocolatechipash
not a bad start, but i liked the other version better but im excited to see how this will turn out. this one lacks something but yeah i think it was a good idea to introduce meghan earlier unlike whatever it takes. update soon, hope this one works out better for you.
not a bad start, but i liked the other version better but im excited to see how this will turn out. this one lacks something but yeah i think it was a good idea to introduce meghan earlier unlike whatever it takes. update soon, hope this one works out better for you.
4/19/2008 c1 puka.shells
ooh. what will she say? i want ellie and max, together.
even if it will be a long run, as long as they're together in the end.
and if not, just don't put meghan in the picture. i'd rather have him single, or go gay with eric, or something.
lol. sorry, though seriously, i love ellie. but shes rather biatchy here.
ooh. what will she say? i want ellie and max, together.
even if it will be a long run, as long as they're together in the end.
and if not, just don't put meghan in the picture. i'd rather have him single, or go gay with eric, or something.
lol. sorry, though seriously, i love ellie. but shes rather biatchy here.
4/18/2008 c1 2katieee
It was torture reading through this the first time. Feeling so bad for Max, and then wishing that Meaghan wouldn't get him. And now I have to do it again. But hopefully Ellie and Max will get together. Like my other review, he likes Ellie more.
2katieeeIt was torture reading through this the first time. Feeling so bad for Max, and then wishing that Meaghan wouldn't get him. And now I have to do it again. But hopefully Ellie and Max will get together. Like my other review, he likes Ellie more.
4/17/2008 c1 4Sing With The Elevator Music
holy cow. i'm totally laughing. i love how becca pushed her had down. thats great. there were a few gramatical errors. you left a few words out. i think you can catch them if you read over it. i really like the story line. i'll deffinitely continue reading.
SWEM
4Sing With The Elevator Musicholy cow. i'm totally laughing. i love how becca pushed her had down. thats great. there were a few gramatical errors. you left a few words out. i think you can catch them if you read over it. i really like the story line. i'll deffinitely continue reading.
SWEM
4/16/2008 c1 12Her Acoustic Heart
Woot! Oh my gosh
I started reading this and thought to myself
"wow, this seems awfully familiar... to that one story I read... what was it called?"
And then i read the part before the chapter and it clicked.
I'm excited this story is starting up, I missed Max's shenanigans
(:
12Her Acoustic HeartWoot! Oh my gosh
I started reading this and thought to myself
"wow, this seems awfully familiar... to that one story I read... what was it called?"
And then i read the part before the chapter and it clicked.
I'm excited this story is starting up, I missed Max's shenanigans
(:
4/16/2008 c1 X
it's nice. it's like the perfect high school cliche - which isnt always a bad thing. it kind of reminds me of james and lily potter from Harry Potter (i'm a die hard fan!) keep on writing!
peace
it's nice. it's like the perfect high school cliche - which isnt always a bad thing. it kind of reminds me of james and lily potter from Harry Potter (i'm a die hard fan!) keep on writing!
peace
4/16/2008 c1 NV12
hey!yay im happy this is back..is it going to be like the last one?and are you going to finish it this time?:)i hope you do
hey!yay im happy this is back..is it going to be like the last one?and are you going to finish it this time?:)i hope you do
4/15/2008 c1 Yo Yo Yo
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funny and good, but the last 3 seconds... uh..
hahah keep on going!
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funny and good, but the last 3 seconds... uh..
hahah keep on going!