
2/1/2009 c1
17Unique1952
I like th story here. That, and your choice of words make this a very good piece. I especially like the lines:
"Hearing a scream,
Moaning in terror,"
Nice work, this is very good.

I like th story here. That, and your choice of words make this a very good piece. I especially like the lines:
"Hearing a scream,
Moaning in terror,"
Nice work, this is very good.