for Matched7/6/2009 c14 reader
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7/6/2009 c12 reader
WOW! I am so excited! You really did tie in a bunch of storylines, and it's amazing! I especially love how characters from your other works recur here.
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I think this is the last story of yours that I haven't read yet, and it is turning out to be the best of them all I think! =DD I love it.
WOW! I am so excited! You really did tie in a bunch of storylines, and it's amazing! I especially love how characters from your other works recur here.
:)
I think this is the last story of yours that I haven't read yet, and it is turning out to be the best of them all I think! =DD I love it.
6/18/2009 c19 
5Juneaux
This story was amazing. I'm so glad you posted it and I wish I had read it sooner! I love all of the characters and the story line and wow. Haha. It was an original premise in an overdone genre, and I hope that you might consider a sequel. Or not, because it was just so damned good by itself.
5JuneauxThis story was amazing. I'm so glad you posted it and I wish I had read it sooner! I love all of the characters and the story line and wow. Haha. It was an original premise in an overdone genre, and I hope that you might consider a sequel. Or not, because it was just so damned good by itself.
2/19/2009 c19 Cariad
Nice vampire story
Nice vampire story
11/8/2008 c19 maria
Loved this, and have loved reading all your other stories. Superbly written, interesting characters and plots. Looking forward to future stories. :)
Loved this, and have loved reading all your other stories. Superbly written, interesting characters and plots. Looking forward to future stories. :)
11/3/2008 c19 23Scriva Bella Noche
That was great :D I really enjoyed the characters, the plotline...it was all just put together very well. Bravo ;]
23Scriva Bella NocheThat was great :D I really enjoyed the characters, the plotline...it was all just put together very well. Bravo ;]
10/25/2008 c19 5Kathleen Moon
Okay, so I liked the first story, Lady Thief, so much that I decided to peek at the rest of your stories and of course settled on this one first...I love paranormal, I even write it sometimes, and so couldn't resist reading this story. Without question, I expected to love it and I wasn't disappointed. Such a wonderful story, filled with delight, a wonderful mix of emotions all created a recipe for this delightful story.
Keep writing...once again, seek out a publisher...the public would love your stories, and so many don't know of fictionpress!
5Kathleen MoonOkay, so I liked the first story, Lady Thief, so much that I decided to peek at the rest of your stories and of course settled on this one first...I love paranormal, I even write it sometimes, and so couldn't resist reading this story. Without question, I expected to love it and I wasn't disappointed. Such a wonderful story, filled with delight, a wonderful mix of emotions all created a recipe for this delightful story.
Keep writing...once again, seek out a publisher...the public would love your stories, and so many don't know of fictionpress!
10/8/2008 c19 Eccthlacine
lovely story! can't believe there aren't more reviews! could have used a bit more background slyly insterted here and there; I was confused quite a bit by the nature of the universe you created and had to kinda figure it out as the story went along. Tasteful where need be, plot lines well written, and well tied where carly and kyle were concerned. Really loved it
lovely story! can't believe there aren't more reviews! could have used a bit more background slyly insterted here and there; I was confused quite a bit by the nature of the universe you created and had to kinda figure it out as the story went along. Tasteful where need be, plot lines well written, and well tied where carly and kyle were concerned. Really loved it
9/16/2008 c19 Strangely Natural
This is a creative story, touching and interesting with a great chemistry eloquently written between Kyle and Jackie. I hated how her mother could treat her loyal correct daughter so badly whilst her other miscreant daughter is treated like royalty. Despicable behavior for both of them. I'm so happy they changed their ways and that that horrid Claire and weak Charity are punished for their horrible deeds. Yay!
*He didn't know why, but he swore that by the end of this ordeal he'd make her more than a temporary relief to him.* Such a beautiful line, just one of many.
This is a creative story, touching and interesting with a great chemistry eloquently written between Kyle and Jackie. I hated how her mother could treat her loyal correct daughter so badly whilst her other miscreant daughter is treated like royalty. Despicable behavior for both of them. I'm so happy they changed their ways and that that horrid Claire and weak Charity are punished for their horrible deeds. Yay!
*He didn't know why, but he swore that by the end of this ordeal he'd make her more than a temporary relief to him.* Such a beautiful line, just one of many.
8/26/2008 c19 8CrazyCowgirl101
I loved it. Very Origonal, even if it was a bit predictable at times, although i never suspected Claire. GREAT job
8CrazyCowgirl101I loved it. Very Origonal, even if it was a bit predictable at times, although i never suspected Claire. GREAT job
5/22/2008 c19 Koofy
That was such a great story! I started reading it last night and couldn't put it down until I finished it the next morning! Very very original and the story flowed nicely. Maybe you should write a story about Evey?
That was such a great story! I started reading it last night and couldn't put it down until I finished it the next morning! Very very original and the story flowed nicely. Maybe you should write a story about Evey?