for Matched5/1/2008 c17 Bree Ph.D
Hm, I thought it was Carly who did all the kidnapping . . . guess not . . . I am intrigued. =D.
Hm, I thought it was Carly who did all the kidnapping . . . guess not . . . I am intrigued. =D.
4/29/2008 c15 Bree Ph.D
This is worthy of Jerry Springer, haha! "My sister stole my man, now I want REVENGE!"
I did find a continuity error though. "He pulled back his jacket and lifted her soaking pajama top to have a look" She had changed into a red sweater. After this sentence you have her wearing the sweater again though. Quick change!
Not a big deal, just thought I would bring it to your attention. =D.
This is worthy of Jerry Springer, haha! "My sister stole my man, now I want REVENGE!"
I did find a continuity error though. "He pulled back his jacket and lifted her soaking pajama top to have a look" She had changed into a red sweater. After this sentence you have her wearing the sweater again though. Quick change!
Not a big deal, just thought I would bring it to your attention. =D.
4/27/2008 c13 
11Whispers of the Lost
Another great chapter :)
Whenever I sign in and there's a new chapter it makes my day, lol. I really like your writing style; I can totally see you writing a book or something :)
11Whispers of the LostAnother great chapter :)
Whenever I sign in and there's a new chapter it makes my day, lol. I really like your writing style; I can totally see you writing a book or something :)
4/25/2008 c11 Whispers of the Lost
I've been really busy over the past few days and just now got caught up on my reading... I cannot wait for the next chapter!
I really like the fact that you update it so consistently... too often I've started reading a great story and the author never gets around to updating.
anyways, kudos to you for that :)
I love this story... give me more! lol
I've been really busy over the past few days and just now got caught up on my reading... I cannot wait for the next chapter!
I really like the fact that you update it so consistently... too often I've started reading a great story and the author never gets around to updating.
anyways, kudos to you for that :)
I love this story... give me more! lol
4/24/2008 c10 2RomanceDruggie
YOU ARE SO MEAN! bad cliffie! -cries-
But the mother needs a good smack,realli...
2RomanceDruggieYOU ARE SO MEAN! bad cliffie! -cries-
But the mother needs a good smack,realli...
4/24/2008 c10 ladykisses86
So I was reading another story and the authoress was begging for reviews and it annoyed me but made me grateful for those of you who write good storys and simply earn reviews based on the exceptional quality of your work so I thought it a good Idea to let you know I enjoy ur story and I had an inkling Carly and Sarah were one in the same and I can't wait to see how this unfolds. PS Thanks for the timely updates as well
So I was reading another story and the authoress was begging for reviews and it annoyed me but made me grateful for those of you who write good storys and simply earn reviews based on the exceptional quality of your work so I thought it a good Idea to let you know I enjoy ur story and I had an inkling Carly and Sarah were one in the same and I can't wait to see how this unfolds. PS Thanks for the timely updates as well
4/23/2008 c9 Bree Ph.D
What a meanie! Jackie left por Kyle all hot and bothered. Poor guy needs a cold shower.
Very sexy chapter =D. Hope it gets hotter! (Jk. . .kinda)
Keep it up Rizzo =D.
-Humanslushi
What a meanie! Jackie left por Kyle all hot and bothered. Poor guy needs a cold shower.
Very sexy chapter =D. Hope it gets hotter! (Jk. . .kinda)
Keep it up Rizzo =D.
-Humanslushi
4/21/2008 c7 Bree Ph.D
Haha, yes Rizzo is was! You definatly had the suspense going for a second. Oh, and I am loving Kyle more and more with every chapter, yay for the awesome vampire-sorta, haha!
Keep it up!
Haha, yes Rizzo is was! You definatly had the suspense going for a second. Oh, and I am loving Kyle more and more with every chapter, yay for the awesome vampire-sorta, haha!
Keep it up!
4/19/2008 c5 Bree Ph.D
Aw poor kyle =(. I can picture Jackie feeling all guilty and running to the bars of his holding cell to kiss him, hehe =D.
Anywho good job, can't wait for the next chapter.
Aw poor kyle =(. I can picture Jackie feeling all guilty and running to the bars of his holding cell to kiss him, hehe =D.
Anywho good job, can't wait for the next chapter.