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6/13/2010 c1 871no.peace.los.angeles
I thought this had a really good rhythm and some original phrasing for the subject. Nice job. Keep writing! :)
4/18/2008 c1 27Edensong
What a beautiful and uniquely written piece. A familiar idea, respun. My only suggestion is to be careful of the parentheses placement in the first stanza. Keep writing!

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