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91fairytale failure
Your fairytale-like phrases and ideas are enchanting. I especially like how your rhymes do not seem to follow the line breaks; this is done very well in the first and second stanzas. It is original, and it gives your poem a unique style.
91fairytale failureYour fairytale-like phrases and ideas are enchanting. I especially like how your rhymes do not seem to follow the line breaks; this is done very well in the first and second stanzas. It is original, and it gives your poem a unique style.