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4/19/2008 c1 Vanilla Tea
Hah! I love this, it was really funny! The line about moose being privileged to make an appearance on cartoons made me laugh, lol. In the second to last paragraph, I think you mean "moose rock?" instead of "rocked." Anyways, nice job on the randomness :)

SB, courtesy of the review marathon.
4/19/2008 c1 15Zonne
What story? Very confusing. I know you intended that, just to be weird or different or something. So I'll say, you did it.

I do like your descriptions of things though. I could picture the two eddies sitting there, staring at a blank wall.

Perhaps put some kind of point to the story.. or at least say there is no point to the story? that would be good

The REVIEW MARATHON link in my profile ... Zonne

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