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2/3/2009 c1 4lookingwest
wow, this is really great, and such images! you seem to really let the poetry flow from you! it was a pleasure to read!
5/10/2008 c1 64fatbird33
m i can relate.
4/21/2008 c1 35Liam02
"Though some many say, my future is no longer gay"...

Everything else was what you were going for, I think, (the preppy yet artistic teenage dream, to be free of the laws made by someone else) except these two lines.

They don't match the rest of the poem, and don't seem very... poetic. More of a forced rhyme. Other than that, I thought it was very well written. Muy bien.

I'll read more in a few hours. Maybe a day. I'm not sure.

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