4/23/2008 c1 174a silenced revolution
it was entertaining. humourous, in fact. good work.

'I guess this poem has reached it's end

It's sad it has ended so soon

There was no point in this poem

What a waste of an afternoon.'

not bad, but here's what i'd suggest for better flow and more word variation:

'I guess this poem has reached its* end

It's sad it's over so soon

There wasn't any real point in this poem

What a waste of an afternoon.'

*"its" is possessive and "it's" is a contraction of "it is".

-adrian