6/8/2013 c1 1leavesfallingup
One question: where was Daisy in this whole matchmaking scheme? How did "the trio" know what was going to happen that evening? Did they already know about Andrew's situation in that first conversation in this story? When did this "master plan" get hatched?

Okay, I lied... I have more questions, but I'll be good and stop now. A cute story. I wonder how many couples never get together just because neither party can work up the courage to speak his/her true feelings?

4/23/2008 c1 pete's sake delete the account
Hey there, I liked the premise of this. It's common, but you create a very vivid picture. However, your writing style is a bit young. The reason it comes across that way is that your story really needs to be proofread. Try reading it aloud. That usually tells you when a sentence is a run-on, and it makes it easier to notice punctuation errors.

I'm looking forward to seeing this again, when you rewrite!