for Storm10/29/2008 c1 
36SacrificialLamb
Very vivid, i love "The sky rips itself open
Pouring rage to the ground" beautiful lines! keep it up :)
36SacrificialLambVery vivid, i love "The sky rips itself open
Pouring rage to the ground" beautiful lines! keep it up :)
4/21/2008 c1 4Amazzieing
Oh. This is really cool. I like your use of metaphors and personification - it's really effective. Well done!
4AmazzieingOh. This is really cool. I like your use of metaphors and personification - it's really effective. Well done!