for To Make a Scene6/29/2016 c4 Guest
i swear to god if nicole is magical i'm just done.
i swear to god if nicole is magical i'm just done.
2/2/2014 c22 MusicGurl8129
I love it so much. I really enjoyed it. This Story made me Laugh, so hard. I love, love it. Thank you.
I love it so much. I really enjoyed it. This Story made me Laugh, so hard. I love, love it. Thank you.
5/26/2012 c21 ndagutierrez
Wow! This deserves more reviews, honestly! I was smiling from ear to ear when Holly told Michael that she loved him and the ending was sooooo cute. They're getting married. Yey Happy endings! Ahhh. :" Really really had fun reading this. :)
Wow! This deserves more reviews, honestly! I was smiling from ear to ear when Holly told Michael that she loved him and the ending was sooooo cute. They're getting married. Yey Happy endings! Ahhh. :" Really really had fun reading this. :)
12/29/2011 c21 
2MuffinsRoxSox
Holly and Michael are so adorable. Michael is wonderful.
I loved reading this. I stayed up until 2 in the morning reading this, and I was so tired this morning. Good thing I'm on winter break.
2MuffinsRoxSoxHolly and Michael are so adorable. Michael is wonderful.
I loved reading this. I stayed up until 2 in the morning reading this, and I was so tired this morning. Good thing I'm on winter break.
8/2/2011 c21 insert.witty.username.here
I LOVED it!
At the end I was practically punching the computer screaming 'just tell him already and get together'!
You wrote all the characters beautifully so well done. Thanks for the Great, Amazing, and Captivating story (don't know why I felt the need to capitalize those words but I did)!
I LOVED it!
At the end I was practically punching the computer screaming 'just tell him already and get together'!
You wrote all the characters beautifully so well done. Thanks for the Great, Amazing, and Captivating story (don't know why I felt the need to capitalize those words but I did)!
8/1/2011 c1 1Person You Don't Know
I'm going to be blunt.
I didn't like it.
Why?
Weak plot
Cliche characters
Cheesy storyline
No hook
Bad choice of words
Odd mismatched paragraphs
Unnecessary details
Boring
...
But that's just my opinion. It seems there already loads of people who absolutely adore your story. It's just me who doesn't understand why.
1Person You Don't KnowI'm going to be blunt.
I didn't like it.
Why?
Weak plot
Cliche characters
Cheesy storyline
No hook
Bad choice of words
Odd mismatched paragraphs
Unnecessary details
Boring
...
But that's just my opinion. It seems there already loads of people who absolutely adore your story. It's just me who doesn't understand why.
10/13/2010 c22 2iheartstarsx
That was so good.
This should seriously be a book in real life! D:
GET IT PUBLISHED
2iheartstarsxThat was so good.
This should seriously be a book in real life! D:
GET IT PUBLISHED
6/25/2010 c13 6SunsetRainbow
I'm crying at the end of this chapter
Rarely any stories make me cry
You're amazing :D
6SunsetRainbowI'm crying at the end of this chapter
Rarely any stories make me cry
You're amazing :D
2/17/2010 c1 WithEveryReason
This first chapter is a bit confusing and add that to the fact that she starting to sound kinda perfect too, which is kinda annoying.
So far she has perfect everything (as in looks) except she wears too much make up and too dark of clothes and now (because of the over usage of make and dark clothes) she looks plain?
What?
This first chapter is a bit confusing and add that to the fact that she starting to sound kinda perfect too, which is kinda annoying.
So far she has perfect everything (as in looks) except she wears too much make up and too dark of clothes and now (because of the over usage of make and dark clothes) she looks plain?
What?
11/2/2009 c1 5christinaxxyo
This was a bit of a depressing start but I can see where you're going with this. I liked how you wrote it and I can't wait to find out more :D
5christinaxxyoThis was a bit of a depressing start but I can see where you're going with this. I liked how you wrote it and I can't wait to find out more :D
8/1/2009 c16 2ChaoticCupcakes
FINALLY! I was begining to think no one was going to make a move. I like reading your story and yes this chapter is perfect. :)
2ChaoticCupcakesFINALLY! I was begining to think no one was going to make a move. I like reading your story and yes this chapter is perfect. :)